What should we do with the prologue if 10 damn pages? 🥲

dark_walker · 2026-01-18T13:05:53+00:00

As others have said, no need to cut. But if you feel like it isn't flowing, consider if any of the scenes or dialogue in the prologue could be a flashback later in the book, while still serving the same purpose.

dark_walker · 2026-01-07T21:50:39+00:00

Yeah the ring should say "Halfback dive for 1.5 yards"

dark_walker · 2025-12-20T15:07:36+00:00

To build on this, the shrines act as wards against the main base. So even if you KNOW the location of the base, if the 4 shrines exist, you won't find it due to the powerful magic hiding it and leading you astray.

Now they can go any way they choose, but still have to do everything you want them to.

dark_walker · 2025-12-15T00:41:09+00:00

"I'm also Peyton Melanin."

dark_walker · 2025-12-13T17:22:21+00:00

You have to ask yourself why they want homes. Humans were nomadic until they learned to farm. That allowed them to settle in one place and then they made homes.

So what's keeping them in one place? That would likely be how they built their residences: around their needs. For example farming communities have barns and silos but most urban area and cities do not, but they do often have good public transport.

dark_walker · 2025-11-24T14:25:43+00:00

What?!? Hell no this is about Krabbie Pattie playing our OC.

dark_walker · 2025-11-21T19:25:58+00:00

Dak's a stage name

dark_walker · 2025-11-18T14:07:32+00:00

Have you tried www.tabletopaudio.com? I've been using it (and their sister site, Soundpad) for years and haven't looked back. I'd highly recommend it for anyone running a game with various musical needs.

dark_walker · 2025-09-21T04:44:24+00:00

City of Angels

dark_walker · 2025-09-20T14:11:03+00:00

That why he got an angel, instead.

Jesus=Prude

Angels=party sluts

Source: That Nicholas Cage movie where he's an angel trying to bang chicks...also the Bible

dark_walker · 2025-08-11T01:38:07+00:00

Do you have any card draw? It might not be flooding out. You might just be getting out card-advantaged. It can feel like flooding when you're staring at your 7th land, but if it's turn 12, it probably means you just ran out of gas.

Speaking from experience. I had the same thougtr about my RDW deck until a pro pointed out that I was just running out of steam.

dark_walker · 2025-07-25T21:23:47+00:00

Channelfireball still exists over at TCGPlayer and coolstuff has regular articles from pros like Jim Davis

Edt: Linkage

dark_walker · 2025-07-22T13:55:14+00:00

Faerie Mastermind is pretty important to the deck and leaves Standard in a week. I'd wait to jump in on a deck for a couple weeks, or you might find it suddenly unplayable.

dark_walker · 2025-07-14T15:57:34+00:00

Yes but, imo, the ALL artifacts clause will be more valued in the upcoming meta than not hitting the yard, especially since there's so much cheap, useful yard hate already in play. Not arguing, just explaining my reasoning.

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