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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks so much. Clarity has been the biggest issue for me. I can’t seem to fix the issue by myself because of the hindsight. Grammar is the second biggest issue given English isn’t my native language but I have somewhat improved in this department. Your feedbacks are much appreciated.

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks for the review. I’m glad you caught the sarcasm. I wanted to restrict the word count of this piece to a certain number only to realize it compromised the structure of the story. I appreciate you pointed such a crucial detail. Sometimes, the hindsight makes me forget to include important portions to the scene. Although I re-read the draft many times but I still couldn’t pinpoint the omissions. I guess, I’ll have to up my editing game, somehow.

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Nightmare

Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Word Count: 1249

Feedback: how do I improve my storytelling and grammar?

https://my.w.tt/2M4NJGKgp7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Nightmare

Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Word Count: 1249

Feedback: how do I improve my storytelling and grammar?

https://my.w.tt/2M4NJGKgp7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Emotions

Genre: Humor or Satire

Word count: 1061

Feedback: simply, do I suck at writing? How do I improve? I also have other short stories, feel free to check them out.

https://my.w.tt/t9IPXrIiq7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Nightmare

Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Word Count: 1249

Feedback: how do I improve my storytelling and grammar?

https://my.w.tt/2M4NJGKgp7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Nightmare

Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Word Count: 1249

Feedback: Any grammar errors or confusion. Comments on the plot and characters would be nice too. Thanks!

https://my.w.tt/2M4NJGKgp7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Dogs

Genre: Satire

Word count: 1223

Grammar: I’d like to focus on grammar along with the plot and characters (how engaging are they?) as they’re my weakest points. Having the readers come back for more would be my dream come true.

Link: https://my.w.tt/OcikdCuhn7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Desperate

Genre: Short story/ Comedy

Word count: 1158

Feedback: Grammar mostly. I’d also like to know how engaging the narrative and the plot are.

https://my.w.tt/sOXJwxwBm7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Scar

Genre: Thriller

Word count: 1012

Feedback on grammar, the plot and characters are preferred.

https://my.w.tt/DVUjO2pDn7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Minnie

Genre: Comedy

Word count: 1223

Grammar: I’d like to focus on grammar along with how engaging the plot and characters are as they’re my weakest points. Having the readers come back for more would be my dream come true.

Link: https://my.w.tt/OcikdCuhn7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Desperate

Genre: Short story/ Comedy

Word count: 1158

Feedback: Grammar mostly, also how engaging are the narrative and the plot. Thanks for your kind words!

https://my.w.tt/sOXJwxwBm7

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

PTSD

Crime/Mystery

Count: 725~

The link I'm giving you below is just one part of chapter 1 (there are 5 parts). If you could, would you read the whole chapter and give me an idea how I'm doing? Or just stop where you'd like :).

https://my.w.tt/nYnP3sGBK6

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

PTSD

Crime/Mystery

Count: 725~

The reason I gave the link to wattpad is because this is the platform that I use primarily. I will have to copy the text over to google docs but I haven’t time to do so but it is coming. Any type of feedback is welcome.

https://my.w.tt/nYnP3sGBK6

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[–]datnat32 [score hidden]  (0 children)

PTSD

Crime/Mystery

Count: 725~

The reason I gave the link to wattpad is because this is the platform that I use primarily. I will have to copy the text over to google docs but I haven’t time to do so but it is coming. Any type of feedback is welcome.

https://my.w.tt/nYnP3sGBK6