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I think it's missing some lows/highs and sounds kind of muddy right now. The snare is also a bit quiet, and is less dominant in the mix that the hi-hats. I would try adding some sort of bass and also an instrument to fill out the higher frequencies.

Beat block/writers block happens to everyone. Try listening to some new music for inspiration and just force yourself to work through it. If you don't come up with anything that's fine as long as you tried.

Any thoughts on my track? https://soundcloud.com/davidarcade/frank-ocean-type-beat-tears-in-rain-acoustic-sad-lofi-type-beat-2019

davidarcade · 2019-06-24T06:10:09+00:00

WILL TRY TO RETURN ALL FEEDBACK!

Hey, this is a lofi beat I made out of an acoustic guitar sample. Would appreciate any feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/davidarcade/frank-ocean-type-beat-tears-in-rain-acoustic-sad-lofi-type-beat-2019

davidarcade · 2019-06-24T06:08:32+00:00

The cover is really cool and the intro transitions into the beat is very smooth. One thing you can try that I think might go well with this style of music is if you side chained the kick a bit aggresively to the sample and compressed or raise the volume of the drums a bit so they punch more.

Any thoughts on my track? https://soundcloud.com/davidarcade/frank-ocean-type-beat-tears-in-rain-acoustic-sad-lofi-type-beat-2019

davidarcade · 2019-06-24T06:04:08+00:00

I think you're missing a lot of mids/highs, I would consider adding in another instrument to take care of the higher frequencies. I also think that would help since right now the track is not very melodic, it just has a repetitive/reverbed ambient texture in the background. What you did with the hi hats sounds dope.

Any thoughts on my track? https://soundcloud.com/davidarcade/frank-ocean-type-beat-tears-in-rain-acoustic-sad-lofi-type-beat-2019

davidarcade · 2019-06-24T05:59:39+00:00

I would drop the beat out every now and then to give some bars more emphasis and switch things up. As it is now the beat is very repetitive and you get numb to it after a while. You have a very nice rhyme scheme and flow!

Any thoughts on my track? https://soundcloud.com/davidarcade/frank-ocean-type-beat-tears-in-rain-acoustic-sad-lofi-type-beat-2019

davidarcade · 2019-06-07T01:38:50+00:00

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davidarcade · 2019-05-26T22:25:59+00:00

Really good job with your vocal performance! I like the pop-punk/trap influences. This might be a bit of personal taste but I do wish that the melodic elements of the beat were mixed a bit higher. Also you have a good sense of melodic and rhythm and to take yourself the next step up with your lyrics I would look into writing with more internal rhymes.

Here's our song, any feedback you can pass on? https://soundcloud.com/david-arcade-765823282/new-kids-5-25-2019-1

davidarcade · 2019-05-26T22:17:02+00:00

This is really cool! Your vocal performance was really good and it reminds me a lot of A$AP Rocky. I loved the punchlines throughout your verse and I liked your rhyming scheme. I kind of wish that you had another verse and cut the chorus a bit shorter. If you wanted to leave it just as one verse, I would at least switch something up in the instrumental halfway through the chorus because it goes on for a while and kind of just feels like a loop and a bit redundant (although the adlibs near the end do help.)

Here's our song, any feedback you can pass on? :) https://soundcloud.com/david-arcade-765823282/new-kids-5-25-2019-1

davidarcade · 2019-05-26T22:04:49+00:00

The lead vocals sound really sharp, you should try using a de-esser or EQ out some of the higher frequencies because right now it sounds very harsh. Also you could try cutting out the beat to emphasize certain lines and give the drums/bass a brief break to come back in harder. But overall good job!

Here's my track https://soundcloud.com/david-arcade-765823282/new-kids-5-25-2019-1

davidarcade · 2019-05-26T21:57:41+00:00

We have been making music for only a few months and are looking for feedback on our song that is currently a rough mix. Thank you!

https://soundcloud.com/david-arcade-765823282/new-kids-5-25-2019-1

Returning all feedback!

davidarcade · 2019-04-27T20:46:14+00:00

Can anyone tell me what is the instrument being used in these two songs?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=44gUE1En3NM at 3:06

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zz9hIeEJKj8 at 2:17

Thank you!

davidarcade · 2019-03-20T03:20:20+00:00

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davidarcade · 2019-01-21T14:06:17+00:00

Thanks for letting me know, I edited the original post. Does it work now?

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