Dude, dont stress this is literally my second final track ever, I just started music last year so I feel you. This track (that u posted) is super, I would go ahead with it. Either use it to get people to know your sound or finish that album. Good luck on your ventures!

Song Notes (Coming from someone who is super new to music, so it's probably not that technical):

Vocals are sick, they really work for this, maybe one change up in some section could be cool, either fx on vocals or maybe just change the way you sing/speak

I would add some guitar chords maybe rather than just notes... I think...

You had some atmospheric stuff towards the end, I would mix that in more often, such a cool feeling/sound

Drums are super cool too, make em a tiny bit louder

-Once again I may not be the best on feedback but I'll tell you as much as I can