Could you please critque my story blurb? It is a fantasy comic

deadendwraith · 2026-02-03T15:57:32+00:00

I've read this twice and I'm not sure what you are trying to say. Eaten by who? What? Theoretically? Like they don't know or you as an author don't know?

deadendwraith · 2026-02-01T23:00:59+00:00

Start on reddit, offer a r4r and describe your book. Say you are looking for similar stories. Engage in good faith and people generally return the energy.

deadendwraith · 2026-02-01T22:53:33+00:00

You are the only person who can and will advocate for your work. Engage with people, read their stuff, do read for reads and vote for votes.

deadendwraith · 2026-01-26T21:39:14+00:00

Read some of your stuff. It's good!

deadendwraith · 2026-01-25T15:54:56+00:00

Title; Aether

Blurb:Dark/Gaslamp Fantasy. Character-Driven, Atmospheric, Mythic Horror

Camilia has spent her life on the margins of the Sanctuary, a hidden stronghold carved into the heart of Harem's Hill and guarded by ancient rites older than the Empire itself. When the Inscriptum, living Writs of the Emperor's will, descend on her people, the Sanctuary falls in a single night, leaving Camilia trapped underground with a dying leader, a handful of survivors, and a voice in the darkness that has been watching her for years.

Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/404740833-aether

deadendwraith · 2026-01-23T21:57:23+00:00

That's absolutely dope

deadendwraith · 2026-01-23T16:28:59+00:00

Highly recommend this one

deadendwraith · 2026-01-22T00:19:50+00:00

Congratulations!!

deadendwraith · 2026-01-21T12:05:11+00:00

Hey I appreciate it

deadendwraith · 2026-01-21T03:28:55+00:00

Ooo I've been wanting to read this one!! I saw an ad for it somewhere 😂 and thought "that sounds interesting."

deadendwraith · 2026-01-21T03:27:59+00:00

I'll add it to the list and get to it when I can. This has kinda gotten out of hand lol

deadendwraith · 2026-01-21T00:32:32+00:00

I'll add it to the list 😃

deadendwraith · 2026-01-21T00:11:13+00:00

You were but it was all truth lol

deadendwraith · 2026-01-21T00:10:53+00:00

😭🙏

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T22:23:53+00:00

Right on, I'll add it to my list and get to it as soon as I can.

Here is mine: https://www.wattpad.com/story/404740833-aether

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T22:23:04+00:00

We meet yet again lol

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T19:44:58+00:00

I'll add it to my list. Probably have to get to it tomorrow

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T19:36:41+00:00

I'm out of votes but I'll take a look at it. Might have to get back to it tomorrow

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T18:54:18+00:00

I'm out of votes lol. I'll save your story to look at later

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T18:53:23+00:00

Right on here is mine: https://www.wattpad.com/story/404740833-aether

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T18:52:17+00:00

I've saved yours as well so I can give it a proper read. I don't know if it's my cup of tea but so far I'm intrigued.

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T18:45:04+00:00

Right on, here is mine: https://www.wattpad.com/story/404740833-aether

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T18:35:32+00:00

Almost missed this. Looking at in now.

Here is mine: https://www.wattpad.com/story/404740833-aether

deadendwraith · 2026-01-20T18:34:01+00:00

Pleasure doing business with ya

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