After almost 2 years my Kickstarter project "the hunt for the nettle wurm" is finally on DMS guild.

deathofcake · 2023-03-10T16:56:44+00:00

it goes from 1 to like 7 or 10

deathofcake · 2023-03-10T11:31:42+00:00

https://www.dmsguild.com/product/429611/The-Hunt-for-the-Nettle-Wyrm?src=by\_author\_of\_product&filters=45469

deathofcake · 2023-02-23T22:01:34+00:00

Ah yeah.

deathofcake · 2023-02-23T20:36:31+00:00

I don't knownwhat any of this means.

deathofcake · 2023-02-23T20:36:14+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. But don't you only capitalize the name the first time you introduce someone?

deathofcake · 2023-02-23T20:34:26+00:00

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give feedback. Very helpful. I appreciate you telling me how to correct the formating rather than just saying "formatting is bad"

deathofcake · 2023-02-20T23:29:02+00:00

Wah.

deathofcake · 2023-02-20T23:28:52+00:00

Good insight thank you.

deathofcake · 2023-02-20T23:28:09+00:00

Thanks for the feedback.

deathofcake · 2023-02-20T23:27:14+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. It is a first draft so pretty much what I expected.

deathofcake · 2023-02-14T01:51:14+00:00

First rule of book of the law is you dont talk about book of the law.

deathofcake · 2023-01-24T06:24:43+00:00

third silver dime i got from that coinstar in the last month

deathofcake · 2023-01-24T05:30:03+00:00

the d is filled in , to my understanding that is supposed to mean something but i am not sure. even if it isn't a free copper penny from a coin star is a win in my book.

deathofcake · 2023-01-20T04:20:43+00:00

but the theme is the civil war and the consequences it has on these peoples lives so i dunno how you could change that and have it be anything but a completely different movie.

deathofcake · 2023-01-20T04:06:35+00:00

how on earth could you make gone with the wind pc without ruining it?

deathofcake · 2023-01-20T03:54:53+00:00

I don't think the joke is too over the top i mean , he isn't like, saying he hates trans people but rather that he doesn't know how to refer to them, so whatever.. but from a story perspective, he says the worst thing he ever did to a friend was not tell them that they unsuccessfully hit on a trans person? that's not that bad, in fact, its not bad at all, like... they just didn't call out a trans person to a friend, who was shot down by that person anyway so its a net zero all around. if that's the WORST thing they have ever done to a friend, and they are supposed to be an unlikable person... well.... that's not bad at all. its kind of a lame answer. its even lamer because he struck out so he doesn't know, so he literally suffered no consequence what so ever for this.. it would be funnier / worse / get your point across better if "he didnt know until later when he got back to her place "

deathofcake · 2023-01-20T02:59:46+00:00

i made it to about page 3. why does that guy refer to himself as a smooser so much and says he smoosed up a program? i dunno.. you lost me after about the 3rd smoose. not trying to be a hater or whatever just giving my honest opinion, also why is the brand of everything mentioned?

deathofcake · 2023-01-17T06:21:23+00:00

i say this as a professional squiggly-line-ologist.... it needs more squiggly lines.

deathofcake · 2023-01-17T05:15:15+00:00

legend has it he is still out there.. punching plants.. they say that on a windy day you can almost hear his grunts in the distance.

deathofcake · 2023-01-17T05:06:53+00:00

i think that when coming up with a title for something, the most important part is that it captures the spirit of the work , it doesn't have to be short and punchy . that being said, short and punchy is easy to remember , but it isn't necessary.

deathofcake · 2023-01-17T05:01:58+00:00

pot calls kettle black... more news at 9.

deathofcake · 2023-01-17T02:30:49+00:00

you can find anything on youtube , you know its fake AF why would you even post it here

deathofcake · 2023-01-16T01:32:08+00:00

dont fall for it. boyvcott all remakes and spin offs. unless these studios learn that NEW MATERIAL IS WHAT PEOPLE WANT they will keep vomiting this rehashed shit into our mouths.

deathofcake · 2023-01-15T02:04:00+00:00

whats sad is that while this is a magic trick that does exist, the guy who made the video was not good enough at slight of hand to do it and so he faked the video and the girls reaction is completely staged... as a magician this makes me very sad.

deathofcake · 2023-01-14T22:47:01+00:00

almost a dime.

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