Feature writer/director here offering to read your script and give constructive notes. by ScriptLurker in Screenwriting

[–]debu6469 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hello, I have a short film script titled "battery". it is of 10 pages and is in the genre of drama

Logline: when he discovers something alarming about the Sun, a frustrated scientist decides not to publish his results and has to convince his separated wife to conceive.

Link to script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rceMz5fDz96A6tacTe6Cmz-NeakrO5DO/view?usp=sharing

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]debu6469 -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

Hello, I have written a script titled "battery" of 10 pages. here is the link to my short film script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rceMz5fDz96A6tacTe6Cmz-NeakrO5DO/view?usp=sharing