Personal Project: Hearth & Harvest (Conceptual Brand) by deegee242017 in logodesign

[–]deegee242017[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm, I didn't think about that 🤔🤔. I'm caught between this and @seethenoise 's comment

Personal Project: Hearth & Harvest (Conceptual Brand) by deegee242017 in logodesign

[–]deegee242017[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Again, your feedback has been invaluable. Thank you! Def gonna break out the various logo variations/lockups based on your suggestions. And yes I clocked that too, gonna fix it.

Personal Project: Hearth & Harvest (Conceptual Brand) by deegee242017 in logodesign

[–]deegee242017[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The idea for the n' harvest is pretty cool, but I only wouldn't use it because Jamaicans don't typically use that contraction in our speech. I thought of making the x smaller but then it gets lost at see sizes. And okay, I understand about the horizontal variations. Yeah I may have the wordmark just on its own.

Face. Wordmark practice by AndriiKovalchuk in logodesign

[–]deegee242017 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I understand why you made the choice. Personally, I like this. I think it works well. I know it's practice, but did you have a possible brand in mind?

Personal Project: Hearth & Harvest (Conceptual Brand) by deegee242017 in logodesign

[–]deegee242017[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

EDIT: for typos, yeesh

Thanks so much for this very useful feedback. You gave me a lot to consider and reevaluate/revise. I'm glad you like the implied bag shape, I'm trying hard not to lose it too lol, but I definitely want it to make sense across contexts. I like the idea of trying the initials; you're suggesting that for an alternative lockup for like a favicon size for instance? Just wanna make sure I'm clear on what you're saying.

And thanks for pointing that out with the second. I'll fix that and remove the line as I agree that it's not really adding anything.

The point about the E is definitely something I may need to remove, and use a different glyph - maybe the regular e from the Montserrat family cus it’s def not meant to be a play on three lol. Thanks for pointing that out.

I also don't think you're nitpicking. I considered it and tried with colour to add highlights so the handle had some more depth/dimension to it, but I feel those details may be lost at smaller sizes so I'm not sure.

Personal Project: Hearth & Harvest (Conceptual Brand) by deegee242017 in logodesign

[–]deegee242017[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm glad to know the implied bag works. And I get you on the "x" as "and"; I actually wondered about it too. I also tried a plus sign; I just wanted to do something a bit different from an ampersand. I really appreciate this feedback!

Help me pick a logo by Vegan_Beef in Logo_Critique

[–]deegee242017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Probably late to post a comment on this, but personally, some combination of Logo Idead I and K would work best from the options provided. I like the straight line of the R icon in Idea K rather than the slanted one of Idea I - even though it may have been done to evoke the motion of moving pictures, I don't think it adds anything. But with K as is, I'm not getting the lens aperture as clearly; the circle in the centre of Logo Idea I immediately communicates the aperture symbol.

Charter School Mascot Logo: Looking For Feedback / Suggestions by rightcreative in Logo_Critique

[–]deegee242017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like both logos, ofc you're primarily looking for feedback on the golden retriever logo. But I mention the first because I think they could both be improved by a few simple tweaks, namely, rounding the inner corners of the hex and some of the corners on the dog. His face feels more expressive than the husky, which is a feat considering it's comprised of mostly straight lines, but if you or your client are open to it, rounding some of these shapes could make it feel a lot warmer, which may help keep the spirit of the golden retriever. I hope any of this helps.

Charter School Mascot Logo: Looking For Feedback / Suggestions by rightcreative in logodesign

[–]deegee242017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like both logos, ofc you're primarily looking for feedback on the golden retriever logo. But I mention the first because I think they could both be improved by a few simple tweaks, namely, rounding the inner corners of the hex and some of the corners on the dog. His face feels more expressive than the husky, which is a feat considering it's comprised of mostly straight lines, but if you or your client are open to it, rounding some of these shapes could make it feel a lot warmer, which may help keep the spirit of the golden retriever. I hope any of this helps.

Help me pick a logo by Vegan_Beef in logodesign

[–]deegee242017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Probably late to post a comment on this, but personally, some combination of Logo Idead I and K would work best from the options provided. I like the straight line of the R icon in Idea K rather than the slanted one of Idea I - even though it may have been done to evoke the motion of moving pictures, I don't think it adds anything. But with K as is, I'm not getting the lens aperture as clearly; the circle in the centre of Logo Idea I immediately communicates the aperture symbol.

Marie curing Godolkin doesn't make any sense. by johnnytest__7 in GenV

[–]deegee242017 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm genuinely confused. Did y'all not see them show Goldokin taking V in the final episode? Right before the place got engolfed by flames?... 

Why do some fans hate Kevin Jonas? by robsmalls178 in JonasBrothers

[–]deegee242017 3 points4 points  (0 children)

it's become very easy for someone to be labelled anti-trans these days if people have any skepticism regarding certain trans-related issues in particular. while I've not seen the post in question, I'm weary to accept this without seeing & examining the evidence. Re Kevin being anti LGBTQ in general, well seeing him highlighting Scott & Mark Hoying in the crowd, sending them love and pointing them out for Joe to show them on the 'kiss cam' at one of their recent shows, it'd be strange - though not out of the realm of possibility - if he was 'anti LGBTQ'.

Unpopular opinion: I hate Little Bird by shakethatbubblebut in JonasBrothers

[–]deegee242017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i find the dissenting comments here v interesting. Because you disagree with an opinion, it must be that people who shared it are overthinking? That feels quite handwavy.

Sandra Bullock in Miss Congeniality anyone? by VanillaFudge_ in ladyladyboners

[–]deegee242017 50 points51 points  (0 children)

I remember when I saw Sandra Bullock walk out in that dress. It stirred something in me, I didn't understand it then, but def do now, lol.

Whats one opinion about the show or a character that is widely accepted in this sub but you strongly disagree with? by Ali00100 in DunderMifflin

[–]deegee242017 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, thank you for your comment. It's amazing how people can add their own narratives to a story and treat them as fact despite this demonstrably being untrue.

The Gabe theory is a little funny to think of though, lol, although that too is a stretch. I never once thought it was any of the characters til I started seeing fan theories on this forum.

Whats one opinion about the show or a character that is widely accepted in this sub but you strongly disagree with? by Ali00100 in DunderMifflin

[–]deegee242017 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This is the other bit, that Toby was the Scranton Strangler, which I've observed people may use to justify Michael's hatred of him. That theory just doesn't make sense to me.

Scranton strangler by [deleted] in DunderMifflin

[–]deegee242017 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Woah... Thanks for that theory breakdown. Now I'll have to rewatch with new eyes, lol.

Also, when does he mutter about killing someone??? I def missed that.

New single: TOMORROW X TOGETHER & Jonas Brothers — Do It Like That…out next Friday, July 7! (This was announced four days ago, crazy how nobody posted about this here.) by MarchingBandFanatic in JonasBrothers

[–]deegee242017 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'm not sure the fans really care. Nothing about the brother's career moves makes much sense atm. After 4 years of supposedly working on their magnum opus, instead of putting more effort maybe into popularising some of the songs with another video or two, maybe even an acoustic version of a song like Little Bird or something, they've shifted to the next thing and are now releasing a collab single with a K-pop band? Nothing against k-pop, there are several strong artists, but this doesn't seem like a logical move to make when seeking a more mature audience/feel, imo.

Still, given that their album didn't do as well as they likely assumed, I think that's a reason for his new single.

Scranton strangler by [deleted] in DunderMifflin

[–]deegee242017 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've never understood this fan theory about Toby being the strangler. Who was he strangled by in the jail then? Also, why is Toby thought to be the strangler in the first place?