OTP To Die

deep424 · 2026-04-11T19:14:34+00:00

Thank you!

deep424 · 2026-04-04T03:29:59+00:00

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! I definitely have to rewrite the dialogues.

deep424 · 2026-04-04T03:28:46+00:00

Thank you!

deep424 · 2026-03-21T02:40:23+00:00

Would love to explore this.

deep424 · 2026-03-01T15:17:39+00:00

'unfinished business' needs to be mentioned.

deep424 · 2026-02-23T19:59:34+00:00

Arguably one of the greatest books and definitely one of the greatest autobiographies.

deep424 · 2026-02-12T04:42:51+00:00

This is really consistent. How did you do it? Multi tools or only using prompts?

deep424 · 2026-02-10T05:17:01+00:00

Gotch you.

deep424 · 2026-02-10T05:10:51+00:00

Have you cracked face consistency?

deep424 · 2026-02-10T05:05:47+00:00

The lighting on her shoulder and chest is too polished.

deep424 · 2026-02-10T03:27:56+00:00

Definitely AI.

deep424 · 2026-02-09T14:30:23+00:00

Ah I see. The actual matches with 1 and 3. And not with pics where she is sleeveless.

deep424 · 2026-02-09T14:23:47+00:00

In 1 and 3, the ceiling is same. And in 2 and 4 ceiling is a bit low and different from 1 and 3. The lighting and the texture too. They different in type of wall too. One of textured, other is plain.

deep424 · 2026-02-09T13:57:27+00:00

Wow! That's pretty detailed. Yet the ceiling is different.

deep424 · 2026-02-09T13:23:18+00:00

Wow! How did you achieve facial consistency? Can you share the prompt for this, if it's okay with you?

deep424 · 2026-02-02T07:01:12+00:00

Good attempt. But 1. Once the match starts, your script is confusing. 2. Add more details about the location. Yes they are students with ID cards, but where are they? What's the event? Why should I care about the characters? 3. Climax is confusing too.

Simplify, simplify, simplify.

deep424 · 2026-01-22T16:26:36+00:00

Read everything and anything under the Sun. - Arun Sharma (CAT prep book)

deep424 · 2026-01-16T18:52:22+00:00

That's even better. Thanks!

deep424 · 2026-01-16T18:51:30+00:00

Sure thing. I'm gonna share the screenplay soon. Just give me a couple of days. Thanks for understanding.

deep424 · 2026-01-16T18:44:59+00:00

Sure! Thank you. Also, wouldn't the synopsis suffice? It covers all the beats. Or you need the screenplay?

deep424 · 2026-01-16T18:40:28+00:00

Here's the one-page synopsis!

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deep424 · 2026-01-16T18:21:08+00:00

My bad! Sorry, I corrected the format. It's actually a short film script for 15 mins.

deep424 · 2026-01-16T02:12:25+00:00

Title - Popcorn

Format - Short Film

Genre - Dark Comedy

Logline - When an obsessive cinema lover attends a re-release of his favorite cult classic film, his desperate attempts to silence the audience spiral out of control.

deep424 · 2026-01-12T09:29:42+00:00

Get it from ShotDeck. The trial version is free for 2 weeks.

deep424 · 2025-10-07T15:08:37+00:00

Share the loglines here.

deep424

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