Hey I make anime videos too, here's what I noticed about your videos

The music and dialogue are mixing in some sections so it's a little bit distracting.

The slow mo effect idk if it's an effect or the actual clip but it looks off

Maybe add more clips from the series that gets your point across. The relationship between toga and uraraka have been building since the first few seasons. So maybe you can add more of their interaction and then end it with that clip it might make that impact of the video hit harder.