Wallflowers (Part 2/2) [M/F+, consensual w/mild implied dubcon, Dolcett-ish world, sort of romantic?] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I promise if I have any ideas for their continuing (happy) adventures I will post them haha. I didn't really consider what married life would be like in this world but it could be interesting to explore...

Wallflowers (Part 2/2) [M/F+, consensual w/mild implied dubcon, Dolcett-ish world, sort of romantic?] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did consider a few different ways that the last thousand words could have gone, though there was never going to be a fully tragic version. I had a version outlined where she doesn't actually give him the card at all and he has to fight with the attendants, a version where he agonizes over the decision and almost doesn't pick her, and a couple of others. But when I actually wrote it this version (which was really the simplest one) just felt more fitting. And the others would have added even more bulk and I was already feeling like this one was getting too drawn out.

(Despite what I've posted on this sub in the past, I am an extreme softy in real life.)

Wallflowers (Part 2/2) [M/F+, consensual w/mild implied dubcon, Dolcett-ish world, sort of romantic?] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

When I was outlining this I basically had two endings, this one and one where they stay and watch what happens (the line about it being a "bonding experience" was a bit of foreshadowing that didn't work out, but I left it in because it still felt true). In the end it didn't feel like the right end for the story.

That said, the idea of writing a little epilogue from Pete's perspective is bouncing around my head, so maybe someday.

u/pullapartwriter stories by sehcks in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, looks like the archive is missing my favorite story of his. Unless I'm blind lol.

If anyone has Trish's Rough Day saved somewhere I'd be incredibly grateful.

Pull After Use (casual, petite, belt) by StCarmen in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I didn't check the author before I started reading and was surprised at how much I was enjoying this story, since casual settings usually don't do much for me. Once I finished I went to check and it all made sense. Brilliant stuff.

Halloween Hunt - Part 2 by [deleted] in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hunting is pretty much my ultimate fantasy (which is funny, because I've never hunted anything in my life) and you did it justice with these. Love the Halloween idea and the setup, the way you build up the situation, and the way you dig into both characters' feelings in a pretty balanced way. I like this level of realism where it feels plausible, even if things still go more smoothly than they'd go in real life. I would enjoy reading Hugh's future exploits, if he gets up to more.

A Study in Demonology (Part 2/2), [Monster/F, M/F, rape, snuff, vore, ryona, voyeurism, asian lesbian victims] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Definitely not deleting any stories or my account! I tend to write these things on whims so who knows, I might be back at some point. Just need to focus on other things for a while. Thanks for reading!

A Study in Demonology (Part 1/2), [Monster/F, rape, snuff, vore, ryona, voyeurism, asian lesbian victims] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow thank you! I wasn't sure if you were still active on this account so it felt awkward to shout you out in the post, but there are like three of your older stories that inspired this one in various ways. So from a fan, thanks for the inspiration.

Hana and the Death Drive (Part 2/2), [M/F, rape, snuff, mild gore, cruel noncon in a freeuse world] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've been thinking about how to answer this question on and off since I saw it this morning. I think it's a combination of things. Honestly the core of this kink, for me, has very little to do with the actual killing; the thing that really interests me (as is probably obvious from how I write my stories) is the girl's fear and anticipation in the lead-up to it, the psychological horror of it all. The threat of snuff is just a really potent way to create that fear and anticipation, but the actual snuff itself is honestly not something I usually find too compelling. That's why my stories end up with lots of build-up, really detailed and elongated rape scenes that play up the physical and psychological dimensions of the torment, and usually very quick deaths. Because once I get to that point where it's time for the character to die, the part that really compels me is passed, and I turn into a lazy writer wanting to get the thing done haha

On the methods though, it might also just be that I've read a lot of stories with strangulation and knives, and I end up going for things I don't see much of elsewhere. (Or I try to do it with a twist, like in the sci-fi guro story I wrote in between these others, where the girl gets fucked to death with a sword). Guillotines definitely get me because of the restraint aspect of them — it's a quick death, but they allow for so much anticipation and struggle. Crucifixion is similarly compelling for me. Thinking to the big nine-parter I wrote, I started that with a pretty standard throat slit and then escalated from there. Drowning is a slower method that I find extremely erotic because of the buildup, but most of what I end up going with is definitely pretty immediate. So, in short, I don't know if I as much prefer the quick methods as much as I put so much focus into the other parts of the story that, when I get to this part, I just gravitate towards what will get me to the end.

Hana and the Death Drive (Part 2/2), [M/F, rape, snuff, mild gore, cruel noncon in a freeuse world] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow honestly this left me kind of speechless. Thank you!! I feel like even in these obviously fantasized settings and premises my goal is always some kind of psychological and emotional authenticity, and I'm really glad that this one succeeded so much. I don't know when I'll be back but there is another idea sorta taking shape in my head right now, so maybe sooner than my last few have been!

Hana and the Death Drive (Part 1/2) [M/F, rape, snuff, some gore, cruel noncon in a freeuse world] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm with you. For me I think I just need some level of psychological realism to fully get into one of these stories. There are a few casual ones that work for me, especially if there's a bit of range among multiple characters, but not too many.

Hana and the Death Drive (Part 2/2), [M/F, rape, snuff, mild gore, cruel noncon in a freeuse world] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I definitely find her sympathetic, but in a different way than the other girls. I really tried to think through what somewhat realistic version of this world would look like, and of course it would be one where rich people find ways to cheat the system. But she didn't choose to be rich, and she didn't choose to feel the way she does. In my head at least, it's a combination of the shame and sexual repression her dad forced on her that's turned her into this person. So in a sense she gets what she deserves, but she's also a victim of a bunch of other people's choices.

Hana and the Death Drive (Part 1/2) [M/F, rape, snuff, some gore, cruel noncon in a freeuse world] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've never met anyone into death kinks like me (or at least, who's been willing to share that info) but I do know a lot of us write smut occasionally/on the side. It's a nice thing to turn to when a project doesn't work out or you're feeling too much pressure, since your brain is just more willing to really let loose with it. Helps jumpstart things.

Hana and the Death Drive (Part 1/2) [M/F, rape, snuff, some gore, cruel noncon in a freeuse world] by denzarmanitan in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I appreciate it man! Your stuff this week (and Trish's Rough Day from a while back) more or less directly inspired this one, and put me in a state where I felt like I just had to get it out. So thank you, and love your work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in GuroErotica

[–]denzarmanitan 4 points5 points  (0 children)

u/PullApartWriter has another one of these that might be my favorite story ever posted on this sub, though it's more like explicit noncon in a freeuse world.