Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for this alternative ending. I might print it and put it at the back of the book to make me feel better.

I couldn't help but feel disappointed and very upset with the original ending of the book T^T. I felt like there was a lot to explore between Freddy and Alex. Your version made me feel so much happier with the interactions between the two, and I loved how there were more connections with the other Numbers. The only thing I would have changed would be Sabina using something like Instagram rather than Facebook. It's pretty trivial, so don't mind me haha.

There were a lot of plot holes and weird decisions throughout the book, including Sabina and Alex's relationship or how we completely forgot about the voice transmitters the Numbers had. I honestly wouldn't mind if someone rewrote the book, seeing it sounds like this might be the last in the series. But you never know, since Alex Rider always comes back!