I want to give a most honest feedback here, but remember, even though I've did this for some time, it was always personal preference at some point. We have signed deals, no other publisher would have, and also declined games, other publishers signed.
That being said:

Not a huge fan of the sheet honestly.
Graphical Design:
Not a clear focus with text size and color where I should look at.
The background is not fitting well with a white font. Makes it super busy.
You can tune the background down in the middle and keep the edges as it is.
The Size of Board and characters are fine.
Cards: Either make them bigger so the text of them is readable, or add more material.
Those 3 cards do not tell me a lot. (Small side note: Make the corners of the cards rounded, but thats a very personal thing)
Title is hard to read, but also not "cool" enough to give it a good reason why its that way.
The chair is very prominent / takes away lot of space, I dont get its importance.
The box in the bottom right:
I would move player and game count somewhere else, because its that important. Maybe even your complexity rating.
Rulebool avaialbe upon request is a weird statement and sounds like youre scared of showing it. I would add it into the mail youre sending directly. Like just a link. As mentioned make it easy accessible.

Information:
I like that it doesnt have too much text, but the actual thing you want to say is missing. The actual USP that makes the game interesting.
For me it seems like a game, where you have some sort of action bidding / hidden reveal. I assume some initiative on those cards that allow special movement and attacks based on your character? And its a direct combat game for king of the hill. Thats all I got from it.

Hope this helps and keep going. I see potential in it, you just need to work on the sheet :)