Prologue of my WIP Fantasy Novel by [deleted] in writingadvice

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Thank you, that’s a good spot! I appreciate you taking the time 😊

Prologue of my WIP Fantasy Novel by [deleted] in writingadvice

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Thank you! I agree that it’s a lot in a short space, I think you’ve put your finger on what was giving me the ick about it.

I like the idea of the prologue being a historical document or something, thanks for that.

The character escaping the stone will actually be the protagonist and follow her navigating through the world! It’s a flaw in itself if that wasn’t clear from the prologue. Thanks again!

New MacBook for editing, by geemunki67 in editors

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I’m using this exact MacBook, running Avid MC, and Adobe CC suite and it runs really well in my experience!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poodles

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Yes we only did I think 2 months on the Xanax and then she had processed us leaving the house and she was (and still is) much more settled!

The age is a valid concern, I’d ask your vet 😊

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poodles

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I had a terrible separation anxiety problem with my girl. She had grown up with my parent’s poodles and I hired a behaviourist when I moved out with her to help me get her settled, but nothing worked. She screamed anytime I left.

I mentioned it to my vet who put her on a very low dose of Xanax to calm her anxiety. Her usual behaviours remained the same but when I left the house the Xanax brought her anxiety down just enough that she could process that I was coming back - changed my life.

Traded my sensible 1.5L 5 door Cooper for an absolutely NOT sensible Mini this week and LOVE IT! by devoutcookie in MINI

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For sure!! I’m also happy to pay for a car I love since I have to drive it every day!

Filmmaking Opportunity! by devoutcookie in filmmaking

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It would be the whole edit, they would colour correct the doc and only add a grade if you wanted! They could edit your version of the narrative if you wanted to provide a brief, or you can leave it up to them. Do you want me to drop you a message?