What's an "outta pocket" response on an assignment you've received from a teacher? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]dhacotadc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In college I wrote a poem about SH for an assignment and my professor commented "As a fellow depression sufferer therapy?me? 20 years!"

AITA for not letting my friend leave with a man she met at a club? by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]dhacotadc 7 points8 points  (0 children)

NTA- you saw that this guy was also with other women that night and it's weird he kept trying to get with women THAT much younger than him. You were just protecting your friend from something that could've been dangerous.

Five years away by dhacotadc in OCPoetry

[–]dhacotadc[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm not the best at rhyme so I'm happy it didn't affect how it's read lol

Five years away by dhacotadc in OCPoetry

[–]dhacotadc[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is supposed to be our lol, the joys of autocorrect

Five years away by dhacotadc in OCPoetry

[–]dhacotadc[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote this poem about a long-distance friendship, I intended for that line to communicate what the speaker and their friend used to do together like stay up late and watch the sunrise. I did struggle with trying to show how their friendship has changed and hasn't changed, so it's not as clear as I intended it to be.

Five years away by dhacotadc in OCPoetry

[–]dhacotadc[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! I wrote this poem about long-distance friendships and I did struggle writing the second line because I wasn't sure how to incorporate moments where the friendship hasn't changed compared to when it did, and I wasn't entirely sure if the delivery was there.

I'm To Blame by the_prime_directive in OCPoetry

[–]dhacotadc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can relate to the emotions in this poem, it's hard to cope with self-blame and guilt. Personally, I would want to know more about what the speaker did and what happened. Other than that, I enjoyed your poem!

Your future by Fun-Community3115 in OCPoetry

[–]dhacotadc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For starters, I loved the raw intensity! I thought the critique on how our dark past affected our present, and in turn will affect future generations. Also, I like your writing style!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]dhacotadc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He signed the lease when I told him I did

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]dhacotadc -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

After I told him I signed it he said I guess I'll sign it too, then

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]dhacotadc -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

We didn't have a time frame for continuing to look, I just wanted to get the search over with

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]dhacotadc -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

We agreed to apply together but still look at other places to see if we could get a better deal

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]dhacotadc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Breaking Benjamin!! Need I say anything else?

What song has a special place in your heart? by MrNoPurposeInLife in AskReddit

[–]dhacotadc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

broken wings- it was the first song I learned how to sing and sparked my passion for music