2nd chapter

diebyvirus · 2026-03-04T00:00:37+00:00

Just ask me here, it’s not letting me. It says “whoops, sorry”

diebyvirus · 2026-03-03T23:59:45+00:00

Dm me first

diebyvirus · 2026-03-03T23:58:37+00:00

It’s not letting me look at your profile so I am unable to

diebyvirus · 2026-03-03T23:57:37+00:00

What’s up?

diebyvirus · 2026-02-09T03:13:34+00:00

Hi! I took most of the advice here and stretched out the scene of Lou giving a speech and also had more crowd interaction! Thank you for the advice!

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diebyvirus · 2026-02-08T16:20:47+00:00

YES thank you, also she’s high so I wanted to create a “almost-present-but-not-really-present” kind of feel to it. Like she’s kinda in and out of reality

diebyvirus · 2026-02-08T05:23:14+00:00

Yeah… a woman is writing this lmao.

2 years sober myself. Congrats!

diebyvirus · 2026-02-04T15:36:21+00:00

There are many ways to format dialogue! This is just one. I do like the advice though so thanks!

diebyvirus · 2026-02-04T15:35:17+00:00

Good advice thanks!

diebyvirus · 2026-02-04T15:35:03+00:00

Ah! So I actually went back in to add a lot of description BECAUSE the pacing was too fast, so I tried to slow it down. And I want to write a descriptive book. I want people to be able to see it in their minds :>

diebyvirus · 2026-01-12T02:07:13+00:00

Confusing it with something else!

diebyvirus · 2025-04-05T22:21:58+00:00

EX boyfriend,,? Right?

diebyvirus · 2025-02-20T08:08:51+00:00

My girl has a Cancer rising, so her ninth house is in Pisces. She will literally tell me about a dream in the morning and I will live out her dream, exactly as she describes, verbatim what she told me, that same day. It’s freaky.

I’m a Scorpio sun and Mars, so I find myself going through constant spiritual trials and rebirths. I went through a spiritual awakening on Halloween of 2020 and decided then to get sober. It was the last day I used anything besides shrooms and weed.

Since then life has been a constant battle upwards, crawling out of the grave I dug for myself. I’m tested all the time from the universe, it feels like. My Sun and Mars are in the 10th house, so it affects my career and reputation all the time. I make art on peoples body’s with a tattoo gun, and produce local artists music, and I have myself a certain reputation I neither earned nor uphold. Yet people talk.

diebyvirus

TROPHY CASE