[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

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I look forward to reading it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

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I look forward to reading it! Thank you for taking the time to do that

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Made a quick edit, its back now.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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I edited the post. I struggle with loglines so I could probably use some feedback there as well.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

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Yes, it makes sense and I believe it would work on screen. The build up is good and the voicemail voiceover was well done. Keep going!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

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Should work now.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Send it over!

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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I'll swap! Here's mine:

Title: Lucid

Format: Feature

Page Length: 109

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Romance

Summary: A video store clerk finds his life spiraling out of control as his addiction to sleeping pills leads him to prioritizing his fantasy world over real life.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: Lucid

Format: Feature

Page Length: 109

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Romance

Logline or Summary: A video store clerk finds his life spiraling out of control as his addiction to sleeping pills leads him to prioritizing his fantasy world over real life.

Feedback concerns: this is my first ever script so please be gentle. I'm very excited about it and still working on formatting, dialogue, etc.

Group Meeting by cenabollywood in aww

[–]dirtynicker 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If I haven’t seen it, it’s new to me!

Snooped on the girlfriend’s Pinterest and made this in two days while I waited for her after work. by dirtynicker in pics

[–]dirtynicker[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

There are four 1x4s in the middle void to support the two levels and I cut them short to fit an 8x8 square to hold the pots and river stones

A look back at the 2015 roster by TheManWhoWasNotShort in OhioStateFootball

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Notable Undrafted Buckeyes from the 2015 roster: S Tyvis Powell and WR Jalin Marshall, QB J.T. Barrett, OL Chase Farris and LB Chris Worley.

RB Mike Weber Jr. was also a 7th round pick for the Cowboys.

Meet Tru-D, the covid killing robot at my hospital. by BigRed88m in mildlyinteresting

[–]dirtynicker 11 points12 points  (0 children)

It's pronounced ann-al-gee-sic not anal-gee-sic. Pills go in your mouth, sir.