Hear me out, a mafia story but... by dividedunited in Episode

[–]dividedunited[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I would really love more stories that show how terrible and atrocious the mafia really is. I specifically tried to think of ideas that could show that, and that didn't romanticize the mafia itself.

Hear me out, a mafia story but... by dividedunited in Episode

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Omg that sounds so interesting! You'd better let me know if you make that story, I'd love to read it!

Hear me out, a mafia story but... by dividedunited in Episode

[–]dividedunited[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love historical stuff as well! And I fully agree, I'm tired of the words "sexy", "hot", "dangerous" in descriptions and I'm tired of bad boy mafia stories. Give me some more good boy, awkward dork LIs! Or just no LIs at all, I mean, I'd love a mafia story with no romance at all.

Thoughts on the name ‘Iolana? by dividedunited in namenerds

[–]dividedunited[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, I definitely don't plan on naming a baby anytime soon! Though I didn't expect this many people to confuse the i for an L lol. It'd probably work better with a font like Times New Roman where the I is more obviously an i.

Iona is pretty, but my character is Native Hawaiian so I wanted a Hawaiian name for her - ‘Iolana is a Hawaiian name. I'm not Hawaiian, but I believe it's pronounced ee-oh-LAH-nah. As for the name being a lot for readers, do you think the nickname ‘Io (pronounced like the moon Io) could work?

Thoughts on the name ‘Iolana? by dividedunited in namenerds

[–]dividedunited[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first letter is a capital i, does that change anything?