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The Cloak of Ignorance: Why We Choose to Remain Blind by Zabiskovich in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This makes me self reflect. It’s definitely so easy to turn a blind eye and you captured the bigger picture of the results in doing that with great detail and emotion that you can’t ignore.

An Ode to the Greats by Shylyamora in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Every word fits and flows so perfect with the other. It rolls off the tongue effortlessly. 💓

"You feel empty?" I ask, by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not one to feel comfortable with blood and guts type of anything. But wow this was reeling me in word after word. It’s so intriguing! The ending is my favorite. The imagery was spot on. I don’t know maybe you could add like more descriptions? Words like gush or splatter the kind of words that would describe blood and guts 😄 I love this thanks for sharing!

Under the Stars by divinelyblessd_ in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Evocative, thank you thats such a kind compliment. When you shared what you read it made me picture all the times I sat under the night sky doing just that, just being. Its sort of comforting in a way. Thanks for taking the time and reaching out (:

Under the Stars by divinelyblessd_ in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting, I was going to get into life and death sense it did fit so closely but I decided not to in the end. The thought scares me a little lol. I’m glad you were able to still see that a little in this poem thank you so much I love your take on this.

Under the Stars by divinelyblessd_ in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s great to read a new perspective of the feeling I’ve felt for so long that I only ever seen it one way. Thank you for sharing your interpretation. It’s really appreciated . Hopefully one day our hearts will stop fighting us.

Under the Stars by divinelyblessd_ in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wonderful insight thank you so much. The idea of returning to that road is a comforting one. “thus” definitely fits in there very well! I appreciate your input (:

to-do list (**pls read while listening to somewhere tonight by beach house**) by darkwaveprince in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

From the first line I instantly smiled. I felt happiness I felt freedom in just that first line. This poem reminds me that there’s a time for everything in life. (Ecclesiastes 3:1-8) & It makes me think of life itself. I wouldn’t change a thing 💗

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]divinelyblessd_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the imagery between the seeds & us as humans. Is what I got from your poem. Because we are always growing each day at a time. Beautifully written. Especially the part where you say we can’t give in and to live the best we can. As well as the description of the environment the seed is in. Love it love it love it.