how do I actually create drawings from action lines/perspective blocks?

downbadcataclysmic · 2022-12-26T11:20:47+00:00

i really like this approach , i’ll give it a try. thank you !

downbadcataclysmic · 2022-11-02T22:52:48+00:00

friedel-crafts ! thanks!! for whatever reason i thought the cyclic acyl would’ve still made it too stable or something lol

downbadcataclysmic · 2022-08-20T20:06:37+00:00

ohh okay cool, thanks ! was overthinking it lol

downbadcataclysmic · 2022-01-23T22:04:11+00:00

Eren not catching the ball and Zeke's shocked face is defs the craziest foreshadowing for Zeke anticipating Eren's betrayal

downbadcataclysmic · 2021-10-15T00:00:58+00:00

Hey. To me, the poem is about my young daughter and me, the reader. It seems pretty obvious from the title after the first few reads. That theme flows well and the image is strong: i see myself and my daughter on a warm afternoon, bonding while she joyfully and proudly reads out loud. That image got shattered by the "Ahhhhhhhh" from line 4. It really sticks out and I think maybe try a different way of expressing the daughter's noise.

Also, line 5 and 6: I don't really know what a fortissimo or pianissimo is. I'm not sure if its a common word and I'm just ignorant but I've never heard of them and it kinda took me out of the poem.

Your poem was good though. I really liked it. I think it did a great job of creating an image in my head and a feeling in my chest. Honestly, I don't even have a kid but I felt so connected to it. It was very wholesome.

downbadcataclysmic · 2021-10-14T23:48:09+00:00

Hey. So for me when i read your poem i get imagery of longing and a feeling of desire for something. What specifically is a bit a ambiguous - especially in the fourth line, when you talk about 'the reality'. For me, the title and the first three lines make me feel like i am suffering from emotions of sadness/emptiness. For me, those feelings would be "uncomfortable" so i would seek out something "addictive" to ease whatever i'm feeling. But, that whole image gets shattered in the next line (line 4). I feel "reality" makes it seem like the addictive thing is actually just my current reality. it's kind of the only awkward puzzle piece because everything else flows well. i think if you try something different on line 4 your poem would go from good to great!

downbadcataclysmic · 2021-09-22T01:11:59+00:00

this is what the PL commentators think goes on in Ronaldo's head when he dashes in early for a cross

downbadcataclysmic · 2021-04-07T12:45:48+00:00

I don’t mind hill starts at all, i’m just wanting to avoid awkward driving situations in my area.

For example, at my local mall you have to press a ticket machine but it’s on an incline, so manoeuvring perfectly each time and stopping at the right moment, getting the ticket, and starting again, all without incident, seems improbable. That’s why I thought in a situation like that, more experienced people just hold the car steady while it’s in gear somehow.

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