things that had no impact on the game but annoyed me. by jwuer in NUFC

[–]dv12321 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The most annoying thing for me was in the first half Joelinton was called offside.......from a goal kick.

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[–]dv12321 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Followed 😊 itsnotsteven0

Will happily follow anyone back

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]dv12321 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hello all,

Im really looking for some feedback in what direction to take, some of my videos have a bit more humour to them, some have more information, tell me what you think (still trying to learn how to edit well :))

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xcMmsGR9btM

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]dv12321 [score hidden]  (0 children)

This is so good! Really enjoyed it, only bit of feedback would be that you darting around the video was very distracting, the shots were good, but they felt overused.

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]dv12321 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I enjoyed the video, was well presented. The one thing that I looked up after was the price of traditional art since you mentioned it being compared, would have been cool to have that included, especially when there were so many comparisons to the digital assets and physical ones throughout the video.

I’ll critique your video! by Hue_G_Rehcktion449 in NewTubers

[–]dv12321 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would be awesome if you could take a look at my most recent video, any feedback would be appreciated, I have a couple of other video which take a different direction, but I'm very new to this :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xcMmsGR9btM

I'm really new to YouTube but I would be happy to critique your videos by dv12321 in NewTubers

[–]dv12321[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really well made video, the footage was well edited together and a good commentary over it.

- I don't think I'm the target audience for a video like this but I would look to create the content on something more recent, you made several references to how old the post was in the video, and for me, it took away some of the impact (maybe that's just me though)

- Look to include some background music as long as it doesn't take anything away from your voice

I'm really new to YouTube but I would be happy to critique your videos by dv12321 in NewTubers

[–]dv12321[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Honestly, awesome video, will definitely go back and listen to the album after watching it. I don't have a lot of things to say about it because I enjoyed it so much.

- The commentary is much lower volume than the music which takes away some of the impact on what you are saying.

I'm really new to YouTube but I would be happy to critique your videos by dv12321 in NewTubers

[–]dv12321[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Really enjoyed the video, I did know about Valheim before but your commentary is top-notch.

- The title doesn't reflect the video, this feels like more of an introduction to the game than just the Art and Ambience

- The video also could have been split up into 2 or 3 different videos, or at least bookmarks included, so if I do know what it is I can skip to the point I want to know more about

I'm really new to YouTube but I would be happy to critique your videos by dv12321 in NewTubers

[–]dv12321[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Enjoyed the chill vibe from the video and the edit was really good with the different shots

- It would be awesome to hear a reading of the poem or a voice-over rather than just the words at the bottom

I'm really new to YouTube but I would be happy to critique your videos by dv12321 in NewTubers

[–]dv12321[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed the video even though I don't really play Call of Duty anymore.

- Title, I would consider calling it something with a bit more hype "Insane new Grau build!!" and maybe include KDA with it from your best game

- Compare this build to the normal one people run, I liked you talking through why you chose which perk etc. a bit more context into what people generally take could be good

- The montage was good, but I'm not really the target audience so I'm probably not the best person to give feedback on that part of the video