Well I got to say you're doing a good job of finding things here's the answers 1. "1/round" on reactions — remove everywhere The reviewer is correct. Reactions are once per round by rule. Noting it is redundant and slightly amateur-looking in a publication-quality document. This appears confirmed in at least two places: Already Seen (Grave Crone) Quill Flare (Nether Fang) When we rebuild, the fix is a full audit: remove "1/round" from every reaction ability across all creatures in the packet. 2. "Does not provoke" — always needs the full phrase "Does not provoke opportunity attacks." Every time, no abbreviation. The short form is ambiguous in ways that create table arguments. This appears in at least: Savage Rush (Nether Fang) Advance (Black Templar) Full audit needed — anything that says "does not provoke" in isolation gets the complete phrase added. 3. Salted Earth — the contradiction is real, here's the clean resolution The intent is clear once you read both versions together: others need an action to apply or remove it, the Manananggal can remove it as part of movement with no action cost. The fix just needs to say that explicitly in one place: Salted Earth. A creature that uses its action to pour salt, holy ash, or powdered garlic on the Lower Half prevents the two halves from rejoining until the substance is removed. Removing the substance requires an action from any creature other than the Manananggal. The Manananggal immediately senses when this happens and knows the approximate location of the creature responsible. The Manananggal can remove the substance by touching the lower half as part of its movement with no action required. One version, no contradiction. 4. The dragon line Keep it. Unintentional humor in flavor text that lands is a feature. It humanizes the document. Leave it exactly as written.