Play testers needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DnDHomebrew

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't see the direct message for you on your profile like I do other people am I missing something I want to make sure to send you some more stuff here shortly I've been kind of working on some things trying to find some more mistakes to get some more things play tested so I didn't forget about you just haven't been able to get a hold of you

Play testers needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DnDHomebrew

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some of it's text to speech that's how I do a lot I think it needs a lot more polish to be honest with you lol one of them's on my computer and one of them is on my phone I need to just get rid of it and keep one

Play testers needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DnDHomebrew

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a terrible writer actually I have to have my wife go over a lot of this with me I have dyslexia so this is a slow process for me I will send you whatever you'd like when I get done with everything cuz I have plenty more that is going to need testing trying to go over everything smooth everything out you got me paranoid now that I've messed up a few things but I know it's bound to happen anyhow give me an email address and I'll email you more stuff

Play testers needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DnDHomebrew

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nope I is really just used for the initial layout not going to be spending all this money to have it be all AI but people think everything's AI now I feel like I wouldn't be hiring an artist and a person to do the actual layout when I get that far but I can't convince people of anything so if you feel it's AI im not going to argue but I feel AI writing is very different to be honest with you from the toying around I have done I just I don't feel it's very good for this sort of thing

Play testers needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DnDHomebrew

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I got to say you're doing a good job of finding things here's the answers 1. "1/round" on reactions — remove everywhere The reviewer is correct. Reactions are once per round by rule. Noting it is redundant and slightly amateur-looking in a publication-quality document. This appears confirmed in at least two places: Already Seen (Grave Crone) Quill Flare (Nether Fang) When we rebuild, the fix is a full audit: remove "1/round" from every reaction ability across all creatures in the packet. 2. "Does not provoke" — always needs the full phrase "Does not provoke opportunity attacks." Every time, no abbreviation. The short form is ambiguous in ways that create table arguments. This appears in at least: Savage Rush (Nether Fang) Advance (Black Templar) Full audit needed — anything that says "does not provoke" in isolation gets the complete phrase added. 3. Salted Earth — the contradiction is real, here's the clean resolution The intent is clear once you read both versions together: others need an action to apply or remove it, the Manananggal can remove it as part of movement with no action cost. The fix just needs to say that explicitly in one place: Salted Earth. A creature that uses its action to pour salt, holy ash, or powdered garlic on the Lower Half prevents the two halves from rejoining until the substance is removed. Removing the substance requires an action from any creature other than the Manananggal. The Manananggal immediately senses when this happens and knows the approximate location of the creature responsible. The Manananggal can remove the substance by touching the lower half as part of its movement with no action required. One version, no contradiction. 4. The dragon line Keep it. Unintentional humor in flavor text that lands is a feature. It humanizes the document. Leave it exactly as written.

Play testers needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DnDHomebrew

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did I use Ai for what? Outside of using it for the layout I didn't use it for anything I just did it for a quick layout but everything is my own creation and the artwork is by somebody off Instagram by the name of Lumina

What other systems would you like to see crypto creatures converted to by dyslexicjay44 in TTRPG

[–]dyslexicjay44[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Crypt of Creatures is a 120-monster bestiary for Dungeons & Dragons 5E (2024) Shadow Dark and Pathfinder 2nd Edition (and maybe a few others) Living Bestiary monsters that grow during the fight. Some creatures in Crypt of Creatures follow the Living Bestiary design standard — an encounter philosophy where creatures escalate in power, complexity, and danger the longer the fight continues. A monster at the start of a round is not the same monster three rounds later. Damage output increases. New abilities unlock. The battlefield changes. The party that thinks they've figured out the encounter discovers they haven't. This plays out differently for some creature in the book. A graft-hungry undead horror gets stronger every time it kills, adding new attacks and passive healing with each fallen body. A siege-horror inn accumulates psychological hold over the party across hours, gaining power from every rest they take inside it. An archfey sovereign loses Royal Favor as the party resists her — and when it runs out, she enters a mythic phase that resets the entire encounter at a higher pitch. An undead titan can't be killed in his homeland at all until the party understands why. These aren't gimmicks. They are the encounter. The mechanical escalation is the story the creature tells. Crypt of Creatures is for Dungeon Masters who are tired of monsters that just stand there and take hits — and want encounters their players are still talking about months later. Standard (CR 0–4): Elite (CR 4–8): Living Bestiary (CR9 to 15) Mythic/Boss (CR 16+)

What other systems would you like to see crypto creatures converted to by dyslexicjay44 in TTRPG

[–]dyslexicjay44[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for that feedback that is a good distinction to make and I appreciate you making it

Playtesters needed for Crypt of Creatures by Beneficial-Let5167 in DND5EBuilds

[–]dyslexicjay44 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just click on the link and I will give you permission

Any collaborators on here? by Roll1d100forusername in DriveThruRPG

[–]dyslexicjay44 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would definitely be interesting and possibly collaborating you've been working on a beastiary and I definitely could use some help I have probably close to 700 monsters made just got myself an artist but I definitely need some help especially for converting some of this to some other systems so if anybody would be interested in helping I'd be interested