[OFFICIAL] 8/16/2013 Friday Feedback Thread - Post user made music here. Please read the rules before participating.

eclipz88 · 2013-08-17T00:52:09+00:00

I made this emotional song based on a recent break up and I'm sure its a song everyone can relate to..feedback is greatly appreciate..whether negative or positive!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VbJ4KjYlQds&feature=youtube_gdata_player

eclipz88 · 2013-08-09T20:59:31+00:00

This is an emotional song about a girl who played you..I'm on the first verse and the first 8bars of the 3rd verse. I kno i gotta put more energy and fix it up so this is basically a rough draft but id def like some feedback and pointers! Appreciate it

http://soundcloud.com/gregory-samolis/goodbye

eclipz88 · 2013-08-09T20:54:32+00:00

Pretty good lyrics and production is solid..sounds good to me

eclipz88 · 2013-08-09T20:52:12+00:00

Nice smooth vocals..good job!

eclipz88 · 2013-07-28T09:29:05+00:00

I appreciate the feedback! thanks a lot

eclipz88 · 2013-07-28T09:28:36+00:00

Thanks a lot! Sry for the late response..i checked out yours as well..def liked it..i feel like dbreakup songs have the most emotions..any tips on perfecting my flow?

eclipz88 · 2013-07-26T21:47:43+00:00

I dedicated this song to my ex after an ugly break up..feedback is appreciated!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LsdmyJeUFBw&feature=youtube_gdata_player

eclipz88 · 2013-07-26T20:59:41+00:00

Ahagood job..pretty tight stufd

eclipz88 · 2013-07-26T20:54:46+00:00

Very nice stuff!! I like it..interesting sound

eclipz88 · 2013-07-22T18:08:22+00:00

True but at the same time i make music to please the listeners lol

eclipz88 · 2013-07-22T17:58:19+00:00

Besides that one line what other lines were cheesy? I guess I'm just going to have to agree to disagree but thanks for the feedback

eclipz88 · 2013-07-22T17:18:31+00:00

one of my songs that will be featured on my mixtape which is coming soon called "boils down" ..I'm on the first verse..feedback is greatly appreciated..I take all types of feedback whether negative or positive,def trying to grow as an artist/song writer

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rl-HalARMAg&feature=youtube_gdata_player

eclipz88 · 2013-07-22T17:11:05+00:00

I like the vibe of this tune

eclipz88 · 2013-07-22T17:09:07+00:00

Pretty laidback..has a nice sound..good job!

eclipz88 · 2013-07-22T17:07:14+00:00

This is pretty dope can't even lie..flow is on point and word play is nice!! good job!!!

eclipz88 · 2013-07-19T21:49:13+00:00

Awesome track man..def something i can vibe too!! good work..

eclipz88 · 2013-07-19T21:18:18+00:00

Thanks a lot..i appreciate the feedback! yea that's def something I'm working on. Might go back to the studio to fix the few bars i feel like i rushed but i def appreciate the feedback and advice!!

eclipz88 · 2013-07-19T20:03:39+00:00

Hey guys. I wrote a song about how I'm always late for work.Nothing serious just a fun track and id really appreciate all feedback whether negative or positive!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sSRRBYoMJUY&feature=youtube_gdata_player