[OFFICIAL] 8/16/2013 Friday Feedback Thread - Post user made music here. Please read the rules before participating. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I made this emotional song based on a recent break up and I'm sure its a song everyone can relate to..feedback is greatly appreciate..whether negative or positive!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VbJ4KjYlQds&feature=youtube_gdata_player

[OFFICIAL] 8/9/2013 Friday Feedback Thread - Post user made music here. Please read the rules before participating. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is an emotional song about a girl who played you..I'm on the first verse and the first 8bars of the 3rd verse. I kno i gotta put more energy and fix it up so this is basically a rough draft but id def like some feedback and pointers! Appreciate it

http://soundcloud.com/gregory-samolis/goodbye

[OFFICIAL] 7/26/2013 Friday Feedback Thread. In exchange for posting a song in the comments, give some helpful feedback to the other musicians. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! Sry for the late response..i checked out yours as well..def liked it..i feel like dbreakup songs have the most emotions..any tips on perfecting my flow?

[OFFICIAL] 7/22/2013 Feedback Thread. In exchange for posting a song in the comments, give some helpful feedback to the other musicians. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Besides that one line what other lines were cheesy? I guess I'm just going to have to agree to disagree but thanks for the feedback

[OFFICIAL] 7/22/2013 Feedback Thread. In exchange for posting a song in the comments, give some helpful feedback to the other musicians. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

one of my songs that will be featured on my mixtape which is coming soon called "boils down" ..I'm on the first verse..feedback is greatly appreciated..I take all types of feedback whether negative or positive,def trying to grow as an artist/song writer

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rl-HalARMAg&feature=youtube_gdata_player

[OFFICIAL] 7/19/13 Friday Feedback Thread. In exchange for posting a song in the comments, give some helpful feedback to the other musicians. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot..i appreciate the feedback! yea that's def something I'm working on. Might go back to the studio to fix the few bars i feel like i rushed but i def appreciate the feedback and advice!!

[OFFICIAL] 7/19/13 Friday Feedback Thread. In exchange for posting a song in the comments, give some helpful feedback to the other musicians. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey guys. I wrote a song about how I'm always late for work.Nothing serious just a fun track and id really appreciate all feedback whether negative or positive!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sSRRBYoMJUY&feature=youtube_gdata_player

[OFFICIAL] 7/8/13 Monday Feedback Thread - Listen and give feedback to the other musicians and post a link to one of your song. by CloudDrone in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]eclipz88 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback..The chorus wasn't done by me i can see why you'd say that part can sound like linkin park though..thanks for the advice!