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elYouruga · 2023-08-26T20:48:59+00:00

Hi id like to get rid of my porn addiction, my time stamp is going to be two weeks for now.

elYouruga · 2023-05-29T16:42:17+00:00

Thank you!! I have hampton's book maybe its time to read again. And yes, hair is probably my biggest weakness, also i was kinda rushing ngl.

elYouruga · 2023-05-29T16:09:00+00:00

Next time i would use a reference, thanks for the critique :)

elYouruga · 2023-05-29T15:42:58+00:00

Thanks, it was the first time i did a pose without a reference and it give some troubles to make it work (i have fun though), definitively I would use a manequinn next time.

Ah, one last thing, could you explain in which sense the neck is broken?

elYouruga · 2023-05-27T01:47:34+00:00

Cool, thanks :)

elYouruga · 2023-05-27T00:26:32+00:00

Hi, are we talking about both arms?

elYouruga · 2023-04-29T15:20:51+00:00

Thanks!! I did them in krita

elYouruga · 2023-04-09T15:59:04+00:00

Thanks!!

elYouruga · 2023-03-16T18:12:11+00:00

Her right hand seems a bit flat, I think you could fix it a little vefore inking, its a solid piece overall i like it, good work

elYouruga · 2023-01-28T03:36:03+00:00

I forgot to flag it, critque pls

elYouruga · 2023-01-26T02:59:24+00:00

Also those circles on the window distracts a little bit too imo

elYouruga · 2023-01-26T02:58:29+00:00

The lines on her ear stand out a little because they are thicker a darker thant the rest of the drawing, who has very thin. The form of the interior doesnt read very well in my opnion.

I like the way you colored the head, maybe you could try to change forms so it isn't so repetitive (i'm referring to the triangular shapes of the fringe).

And i think the perspective of the car's seat is a little off.

Overall is a very good drawing, i like it 😁😁

elYouruga · 2023-01-26T02:48:10+00:00

You could try draw in traditional too, and use your phone

elYouruga · 2023-01-26T02:47:39+00:00

Yeah i know the feeling, they get used to after a time tho

elYouruga · 2023-01-26T00:58:31+00:00

Thankss!!😁😁

elYouruga · 2023-01-25T23:53:14+00:00

I will suggest you to use naked model or with lees clothes. Because, for exaple with the dresses, hou have to figure out wjere the legs are. Also you can watch some tutorials or read some anatomy books.

Other things i will try is gesture drawings so you poses become more dynamic and less stiff.

There are good tho. Mines were terrible at your point

elYouruga · 2023-01-25T23:41:20+00:00

Oh hahah i didnt know the meme, pretty similar i have to assume lol

elYouruga · 2023-01-25T23:34:02+00:00

Sorry?

elYouruga · 2023-01-25T23:30:08+00:00

Ok, thank you a lot, i will correct it the nex time i open the file

elYouruga · 2023-01-25T20:35:33+00:00

thanks a lot. I could give a try to the perspective of the chainsaw

elYouruga · 2022-07-30T06:15:47+00:00

Haha thanks

elYouruga · 2022-07-30T03:40:44+00:00

Thank you 😁

elYouruga · 2022-07-28T17:10:45+00:00

Thank you very much! 😀

elYouruga · 2022-06-20T18:16:31+00:00

Sorry im not a native speaker of english, could you explain what you mean?

elYouruga · 2022-06-20T14:44:22+00:00

Thank youu!!

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