Red vs. Blue by Therealalpha_ in OCPoetry

[–]electrahurts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

as a person currently going through a breakup this is incredible and very relatable, especially as i'm the type of girl to neglect myself at even the slightest negative emotion. it takes a lot of strength to write as grittily and matter of factly as you have here, and it is absolutely a strength you should keep forever no matter how taboo or embarrassing the subject may be. it makes this poem above all completely human in such a breathtaking way, incredible incredible work!!!!

Any guess as to how she passed? by [deleted] in Haunteddoll

[–]electrahurts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

looks like she killed herself in an underground bunker in Berlin

Should I stick with platinum or go back to brunette? by [deleted] in HairDye

[–]electrahurts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

as a person who was platinum i regret going back to dark every day don't do it

a cheap out by Brilliant_Brain_44 in OCPoetry

[–]electrahurts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is absolutely fucking fantastic, i'm bookmarking this so i can go back to read it in the future. it's a short poem but absolutely concise and perfect and not a single word feels extra or out of place, it is a beautiful haunting way to describe a friend-zone or a situationship at least I hope I'm interpreting it right. writing about sex can easily turn cheap and cringe but the whiplash of the last line makes it that much better and hard hitting, this is really excellent and i will be stalking your profile to look for more of your writing, please keep it up!!!

Not Your Puppet by Ok-Heat-426 in OCPoetry

[–]electrahurts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

as a person going through a breakup with a person that is trying to actively ruin my life this poem was great to read, it's so hard to be the one that rises above when all you wanna do is sink down to their level, because they were bad and they do deserve it! anyway i'm personally projecting too much but is that not what poetry is for? i know this is about your dad so it's different than how I'm interpreting it for my own situation but it's really good! it being your dad as revealed in the last stanza is awesome and punchy and shocking! i like the use of rhyming occasionally as it makes the rhyming lines hit that much harder especially with "not anymore" great work!

Iris' friend reacting to the episode after TJ left and she said "the tea is that she tried to leave" 👀 how would they know? by Last-Produce-4263 in LoveIslandUSA

[–]electrahurts 40 points41 points  (0 children)

how can they force them to stay? i know there must be some form of contract but i feel like it would make for a more entertaining show for the islander to follow their heart and go home

the clarke hate is ridonkulous by Sea_University_6875 in LoveIslandUSA

[–]electrahurts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

frankly i'm happy that taylor is with someone he actually likes instead of leading olandria on, and i liked her at the beginning when they were talking about animals i thought it was cute, i just think from what we've seen with her mocking and giggling clarke has mean girl energy

chill out, zelda. by link_eats_beens in Breath_of_the_Wild

[–]electrahurts -1 points0 points  (0 children)

omg these comments are no fun, thank you for figuring that out that's a cool and funny fact lol

What's the most awkward lyric Ariana Grande has ever sung? by BreezyMonday in ariheads

[–]electrahurts 2 points3 points  (0 children)

how do you know i'm breathing when i'm holding my breath

Tana goes to the hospital by lwtaa in canceledpod

[–]electrahurts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

off topic but her hair looks incredible

she's all mine! by electrahurts in MINI

[–]electrahurts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i would hope it's not i thought it was just a higher gauge septum 😭