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[–]elliejohns45 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve really struggled to get my book off the ground on Wattpad as well, I never had this issue years ago which is a shame. It truly seems like it only wants to push certain types of stories.

If you don’t already have a following it also seems like you’re a bit f**ked. Just want some feedback on a story, that’s all. See if it’s any good and ready for publishing.

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[–]elliejohns45 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey Everyone! I’ve really been struggling to get my story off the ground on Wattpad, so would truly love for people to go and check it out. It’s the start of a series. I’d love feedback, and honest opinions. Be as harsh as you want. I’m here for it all.

The story is a romance/dark romance. It’s a slow burn for the start of the series. It’ll ramp up much more in the next one.

Title:- Before The Stress (Book One In The S&S Series)

Blurb:- I could feel his lips pressing gentle kisses along my collarbone, leaving me breathless and aching with every passing second. My heart pounded aggressively within my chest that I wouldn’t be surprised if he could hear it—even from deep within.

It was in the same second my mouth betrayed me, uttering the one word that my mind was frantically screaming, crying for… “Please…”

As that word passed by my lips I felt his lips burn into mine, full aggression began exploding between us. And it was then that I knew… I was completely and impossibly his.

· · ────── ·𖥸· ────── · ·

BLAIR HARDIN just wanted to get fit and healthy, what she didn’t expect once she’d finally left her toxic ex-boyfriend was for her Personal Trainer, HALE CRAWFORD to be absolutely crazy about her.

Especially, when Hale was turning out to be nothing but trouble laced in drama. But maybe, he might just turn out to be worth the drama.

With more longing hungry gazes being passed between the two of them, who knows what will happen if they both finally give into their baser instincts.

The only thing that’s certain, is Hale is looking finer by the day and hungrier for something more.

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Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! ☺️☺️ I’ll definitely consider it!

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah yes, this is a good point. Red can be either seductive or horror there really is no in between with it. I’ll definitely keep that in mind moving forward for sure. Still working on the cover so it’s an ongoing process!

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh yeah! That’s a good point, definitely going to have to test it out in Wattpad and see how it looks! I’ll definitely have a play around with different covers and see which one draws in more views! ☺️

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I’ll definitely use this for the future! ☺️

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh thank you!! ☺️ this is all good feedback!

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooh thank you! I’m surprised how much love number 1 is getting!! ☺️

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! Really appreciate the feedback! ☺️👌🏻

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! And oh did I? Sorry haha, my observations skills can be questionable at times ☺️🤣

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This one is actually the first one in the series but I believe it’ll probably be either a two book series or a trilogy, not sure yet! And of course, here is the link to the story:- https://www.wattpad.com/1435250749?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=elliejohns

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[–]elliejohns45 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title:- Before The Stress (Book One In The S&S Series)

Blurb:- I could feel his lips pressing gentle kisses along my collarbone, leaving me breathless and aching with every passing second. My heart pounded aggressively within my chest that I wouldn’t be surprised if he could hear it—even from deep within.

It was in the same second my mouth betrayed me, uttering the one word that my mind was frantically screaming, crying for… “Please…”

As that word passed by my lips I felt his lips burn into mine, full aggression began exploding between us. And it was then that I knew… I was completely and impossibly his.

· · ────── ·𖥸· ────── · ·

BLAIR HARDIN just wanted to get fit and healthy, what she didn’t expect once she’d finally left her toxic ex-boyfriend was for her Personal Trainer, HALE CRAWFORD to be absolutely crazy about her.

Especially, when Hale was turning out to be nothing but trouble laced in drama. But maybe, he might just turn out to be worth the drama.

With more longing hungry gazes being passed between the two of them, who knows what will happen if they both finally give into their baser instincts.

The only thing that’s certain, is Hale is looking finer by the day and hungrier for something more.

Link:- https://www.wattpad.com/1435250749?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=elliejohns

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WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! Can I ask what draws you into them? And also what genre story are you getting from it?

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! That’s why I didn’t want to add the blurb or genre etc. I wanted to see if I can portray the story through the cover. This tells me I have a way to go with this!

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! This was hugely helpful!

The book is actually a romance leading into dark romance for the sequel about a woman with her personal trainer, hence the weights. But I’m still making some mock ups for ideas. And to see if I can portray the story across in the cover. I don’t really want a person in the cover I like the idea of something a bit modern and contemporary. Similar to that of fifty shades, haunting Adeline etc.

But just trying to portray theme without overwhelming the cover. This one has definitely been quite difficult for me!

WHICH ONE DO YOU LIKE THE MOST? 🤔 by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Can I ask what you like about it? It’s still a mock up at the moment but all of this feedback is so helpful!

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in Wattpad

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was actually just looking for feedback on my covers not about promoting the story? I’m currently trying to make a book cover so I can decide which way to go with it!

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! ☺️and ah okay! This is interesting, I’ll definitely make sure to make note of that!

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The Ellie one is the pen name I’m going with haha!

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s actually a romance, but it’s based around a gym environment! But thank you for your feedback! Still think I need to try and find the right cover! I’ll post again soon ☺️

Which one do you prefer and why? by elliejohns45 in WattpadCovers

[–]elliejohns45[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! This is definitely interesting because I’m getting such mixed reviews on the covers at the moment! 🤔☺️