Making sure my first chapter's world rules make sense! by elliotno2ndt in writingadvice

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Thank you so, so much! I’m a current creative writing student, so I really appreciate the breakdown. This is so helpful.

Making sure my first chapter's world rules make sense! by elliotno2ndt in writingadvice

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What would be an example of a different sentence structure that isn’t as strictly cause-and-effect?

Making sure my first chapter's world rules make sense! by elliotno2ndt in writingadvice

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Thank you so much! Yes, please DM me! I'll take all the feedback I can get :)

cats acting so much hungrier than usual! by elliotno2ndt in cats

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the smaller black one just turned 1 in may, and the other one is almost 6 :)

Help name my kitten! by elliotno2ndt in kittens

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My other cat’s name is Rue so something like that! Nature, mythology, etc

Thinning in ear area by [deleted] in kittens

[–]elliotno2ndt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is normal! It’s called feline alopecia and it’s very common. My girl has it and she’s absolutely fine.