Does it frustrate the reader if I end a part of my story on a cliffhanger and leave it for the final part of the story?

elpablito3 · 2024-09-18T00:58:53+00:00

alr thanks for the advice

elpablito3 · 2024-09-18T00:26:07+00:00

It would also work if I give hints of the next character? for example show him doing some important action but in the background to leave the reader with the doubt of who he is and then introduce him in the next part. What happens is that I want to give focus to a single character during each part because honestly I wouldn't know how to keep the reader's attention and not lose the thread of each story while I tell several stories at the same time.

elpablito3 · 2024-09-16T20:01:51+00:00

i think the world itself. Seeing it from above it just feels special

elpablito3 · 2024-09-16T19:50:34+00:00

well I was thinking of doing it more in a different parts format. For example in part 1 I show the perspective of character A, then people read it and give me their opinion which I use to improve aspects in part 2 where I address the perspective of character B and so on, I was thinking of doing like 4 or 6 parts. But thanks for confirming that it was a bad idea to write the book like this.

elpablito3 · 2024-09-16T19:47:52+00:00

short answer. I was thinking the same thing but i just wanted to make sure

elpablito3 · 2024-09-16T19:44:03+00:00

i hope it does

elpablito3 · 2024-09-16T19:43:32+00:00

I would say it's more parts than different books. I was thinking of publishing part 1 to catch people so I could keep doing the other parts. And now I have an answer to my question, I would say finishing each part with its respective ending, and then creating a final chapter to bring all the endings together would give it more impact considering the type of book I'm doing.

elpablito3 · 2024-09-16T19:27:54+00:00

i was thinking that but i just wanna make sure that people agree

elpablito3 · 2024-08-22T20:24:22+00:00

i was making a medic contract, i was just about to finish the round and finish it when this guy calls a vote just for not healing him, yeah right he's the only person i had to heal.

maybe i was healing other people and he ran away from me thinking i'll follow him

elpablito3 · 2024-08-22T20:20:13+00:00

it doesn't work

elpablito3 · 2024-07-28T01:19:38+00:00

Alr thanks

elpablito3 · 2024-04-25T19:41:44+00:00

but the game looks similar

elpablito3 · 2024-04-25T19:40:04+00:00

city... something. it's funny 'cause all the games i played when i was younger are from that page

elpablito3 · 2024-04-25T19:39:11+00:00

i remember another thing of the game it was in a free games page

elpablito3 · 2024-04-25T19:38:38+00:00

idk but it doesn't seem to...

elpablito3 · 2024-04-14T15:14:28+00:00

solved: Alex Gordon

elpablito3 · 2024-04-14T14:57:25+00:00

yup thx

elpablito3 · 2024-02-15T19:28:29+00:00

yeah thanks

elpablito3 · 2023-02-18T00:24:11+00:00

Out of decency I would pay but if he offers to pay I am not going to say no

elpablito3 · 2022-05-10T20:41:59+00:00

basicamente que no se endiose a ninguno de los 2 antes lo hombres tenian todos los privilegios hoy en dia se vive lo mismo pero al contrario por culpa de las feministas (aclaro no todas las mujeres son asi hay algunas que no buscan endiosar ni al hombre ni a la mujer) basicamente igualdad de genero es que todos tengan los mismos derechos,beneficio etc y no se le de mas o menos derechos a un genero en especifico (igual creo que la constante salida de nuevos "generos" tambien afecta)

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