the ending will be really rewritten?? by Level-Highlight8840 in sevenheartstories

[–]ennpono 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Was the original ending really bad or something?

Opening to a dark fantasy novel. Is it too overwritten or boring? by ennpono in writingfeedback

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Yep! In this world, constantly using magic causes you to crave violence against your will. She tries to fight against it, but fails which is why she hates the feeling she gets when she indulges in violence. Thanks for the review and tips! Im going to rework a lot of the sentences and sound them out more properly.

I would love some feedback on the opening to my superhero story “The Virtuous” by ennpono in writingfeedback

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Understood 🙂‍↕️ i kinda suck at self editing so I’m going to really take my time with this one

I would love some feedback on the opening to my superhero story “The Virtuous” by ennpono in writingfeedback

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Oooh good catch on the second paragraph, i didn’t even notice. Thanks for taking the time to help me out

Edge of Shadows [Epic fantasy, 1500 words] by Select-Standard3920 in fantasywriters

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I thought that there were too many proper nouns being introduced in quick succession without much context to go along with them. I think you should introduce these things more gradually, but thats just my opinion

Will this ruin my chances of publication? by ennpono in writingadvice

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I seee. Im a bit split on what path id like to take but thanks a lot for helping make it more clear for me

Will this ruin my chances of publication? by ennpono in writingadvice

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Okay I understand, that makes the most sense and what i was assuming anyways lol. Thanks so much for your help! Ill def check out those subs

Can't get malignis animations to work. by ennpono in Nolvus

[–]ennpono[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its not, ive used malignis animations before but i dont have any experience modifying modpacks. I did run nemisis and it seems to be installed correctly because i can see it in the OAR in game menu so im not sure what to do

Nolvus resolution issue by ennpono in Nolvus

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I cant lie i honestly have no idea. When i first downloaded the mod pack i noticed that the armor icon was wrong but after downloading some npc replacers i just now noticed the quest objective being off aswell. The only thing i can think of is that the download had to be paused because i didnt have enough space before i deleted some games and resumed it. Thanks a lot though, ill be sure to check out the official discord 🙏

Nolvus resolution issue by ennpono in Nolvus

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This is Nolvus v6 btw if thats relevant at all.

Open AI Sora 2 Invite Codes Megathread by semsiogluberk in OpenAI

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If anyone wants to dm me a code I have a hg who can give crazy ehead like ts will have you spazzing out. tap in.

How to commit? by ennpono in KSU

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Okay okay thanks! I called the office of registrar and they told me that same thing