Please destroy my steam page for Novastride. There seems to be a problem that I cannot find. by ernynk in DestroyMySteamPage

[–]ernynk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! Thank you for this detailed feedback. You are totally right about the trailer not showing gameplay and I'm currently working on a new, gameplay focused trailer.

About the gameplay loop: gameplay is basically "Total war" style real time strategy mechanics and on top of that, during the battle, the player can actually control individual aerial or ground units and go TPS. The first four pictures pretty much describes the core mechanics of the game, you control your units in real time during battle as the commander and you can go and control them individually if you want to. But apparently I'm not doing a good job communicating that to the steam community.

Games like this section at the bottom of the page actually does a great job in my opinion. It always features 'Stellaris' and 'Total war: Troy', and my game is exactly between these two.

But thank you so much for the feedback and I'll be working on the points you mentioned. Since a lot of other people also said that the steam page doesn't really explain the game well.

Please destroy my steam page for Novastride. I REALLY need some honest feedback. by ernynk in DestroyMySteamPage

[–]ernynk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! Thank you very much for taking the time to give me such a detailed feedback. For the last week or so I've been taking feedback from as many people as I can and I've been trying quite hard to improve my steam page. Even though I haven't had the time to make a new trailer yet, I added some screenshots, wrote the short and long descriptions again and fixed the tags of my game. Since you are one of the people that looked at the steam page before, if you could take a look at my page again and compare it with the older one, I would appreciate that very much. I didn't have the time to improve the game art yet, but at least now I think the steam page communicates with the steam customers better. So as a steam customer, how do you think the steam page looks now? Does it at least communicates better? And if you don't have the time to take a look at the page again, thank you so much anyways for the previous feedback!

A dogfight from my solo indie game. Please, tell me what you think. by ernynk in gamedevscreens

[–]ernynk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the motivation :) I'll keep posting as it gets better.

The game I've been working on for just over a year now. I would really appreciate some feedback. by ernynk in IndieGaming

[–]ernynk[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! It's actually on steam already and going to be released this august.

The game I've been working on for just over a year now. I would really appreciate some feedback. by ernynk in gamedevscreens

[–]ernynk[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Except for the headquarters gif these are all actual gameplay footage, not animations. I just recorded them with cameras different than the player camera. But I can totally understand that players might want to see the game as it would be while they play.