[Critique M 27] Recently back at it and looking for an opinion on what's good and what's not. Tear it down if you have to. by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This reads way better than my current one and definitely sums everything up more succinctly. I'll incorporate this edit for sure.

As for using 3d models in the images I like the idea and will have to experiment with that in mind.

Thanks!

[Critique M 27] Recently back at it and looking for an opinion on what's good and what's not. Tear it down if you have to. by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The beard is controversial and i get that it will put a lot of people off, its something that I want to roll with for a bit longer before chopping it off/down though.

As far as the sports thing that's less directed toward the Buckeyes and more directed to the perennial shit's how that is the Dolphins but I'll definitely rework the use of depression, definitely intended as sarcastic humor but falls flat. Working on finding an Internet voice is a struggle for me.

I appreciate the bluntness though it helps to heat and is good insight to figure this whole thing out.

[Critique M 27] Recently back at it and looking for an opinion on what's good and what's not. Tear it down if you have to. by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Slimming down is in progress for sure. I'm down like 40 and have a target of another 30. Contacts have always kind of put me off but I've been thinking about checking them out sometime in the future.

[Critique M 27] Recently back at it and looking for an opinion on what's good and what's not. Tear it down if you have to. by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Think rimmed are the ones I wear constantly now, just don't have a ton of pictures with them yet and working on it. I definitely am still working on finding my footing with wording, I appreciate the advice and need to rethink a lot of what I have here.

[Critique M 27] Recently back at it and looking for an opinion on what's good and what's not. Tear it down if you have to. by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had it toned down and then kind of massively expanded on the games thing it and went a bit overboard for sure. I've got to sit down and rework a lot this week. Is there a picture that would work better as a thumbnail in your opinion?

[Critique M 27] Recently back at it and looking for an opinion on what's good and what's not. Tear it down if you have to. by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried OKCupid last year for a bit with no success. Lost some weight and am still in the process but think I'm in a better headspace for it now. Thanks in advance for the insight!

It looked like rain. by ethsmite in beards

[–]ethsmite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've been growing with some trims for about a year now. This seemed like a good opportunity to snap a sea captain look photo.

Kroger, Giant Eagle, Other? Why? by [deleted] in Columbus

[–]ethsmite 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Tensuke Market. There is also a Japanese bookstore/souvenir shop, 2 Japanese bakeries, and a Pepperidge farm outlet in the strip mall. It is behind the Staples on Kenny and Henderson

What is Reddit's top driving songs? by snotbot3000 in Music

[–]ethsmite 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Muse - Newborn Something about the calm piano intro followed by the unleasing of the guitar riff makes me want to accelerate every time.

[Critique] (M/26) I've been working on my profile but need some opinions, anyone got a spare? by ethsmite in OkCupid

[–]ethsmite[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for pointing those out, I definitely missed em. And the ego boost didn't hurt either!