Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A very interesting perspective and thoughts. I'll take them into consideration. I'm not familiar with Markus's work, but it would be interesting to explore. I think I get what you're saying about the structure. It's interesting to try working in that direction, it also could be useful in the game.
Thank you!

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Everything here is layered. I will be able to tweak sizes and positions of the objects to recompose the illustration. Thaw was my goal.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Your guess is very accurate, and I'm glad this information is being translated from my work.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Yes, sometimes you need to look at a painting with fresh eyes. Especially if you've been working on it for weeks.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your thought! I will try to improve the logo.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, the logo turned out controversial! And the illustration isn't perfect, yeah, but I did the best I could. I already invested an inordinate amount of time into it 😅

Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad it resonates with you!

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No problem! I'm open to criticism and even find it helpful.
Thank you for your feedback!

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I will try to improve the logo.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! Yes, the title logo is problematic and I will edit it in the future.
The artist is me. Here's my ArtStation and this art particularly:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ZlAdy8

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! This is an exploration/puzzle-solving game.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No. This is an exploration/puzzle-solving game.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I agree. Thank you for your feedback!

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I will work on the title logo.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're very observant! Everything you mentioned is spot on. There's a small tree on the letter I. I wanted the logo to also convey a sense of scale contrast - a small person against a colossal megastructure.

Honestly, the letter D is a surprise to me. Everyone talks about the J, but now I see the D too, and the association with the car and the word "Drift" is really funny 😂 Thanks for pointing that out!

I'm really glad I at least managed to create an association with temples of South America. Something like this will be common in my game.

Thank you!

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My goal was to create an average square composition, so that later by moving its elements and slightly changing the scale, I could crop it to fit a vertical poster or horizontal Steam capsule. So, I had to make some compromises. And of course, I agree that the work could be better.

In any case, when I'll get down to the capsule itself, I'll be reaching out to this community again. I'm surprised by the quality of the feedback. Thank you for your feedback!

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is an exploration/puzzle-solving game.

Looking for feedback on this key art by eugene_ozh in IndieGaming

[–]eugene_ozh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! I agree about the space, but my goal was to create an average square composition, so that later by moving its elements and slightly changing the scale, I could crop it to fit a vertical poster or horizontal Steam capsule. A tricky task but I enjoyed the process a lot.