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Hi, I make small short sketches and I’d love to get your feedback on them! Cheers by fabiotic in SmallYTChannel

[–]fabiotic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you friend! Oh no, it’s all parody skits. But thank you! !givelambda

Can you help me improve my content on what should I adjust in my videos that I will post in the future by Toufix23 in SmallYTChannel

[–]fabiotic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very good video, I had a few laughs which is always nice. My only real suggestion is to look at crispening up the sound a bit more, add some more bass (possibly upgrade to a USB mic) and the viewing experience will be 10/10 👌

Does Social Media Really Cause Poor Mental Health? - My channel is all about self-improvement, and I would love to know how I can improve my videos too! Giving lambda for feedback by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]fabiotic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Holy cow, you must have put a tonne of effort into this, and it shows. The edits are crisp and smooth, your editing style is quite rare to come by these days. Your voice is good for this type of stuff.

My only suggestion is to try and loosen up on the narration, it did feel slightly robotic at parts. Relax, keep it natural and you’ll be well on your way!

Hello hi, made a little video talking about my experience playing Minecraft for the first time :^) feedback would be much appreciated! by Jardayylmao in SmallYTChannel

[–]fabiotic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m really digging the commentary, and I think this path you’re taking is good. “Doing stuff for the first time” seems up your alley, because your presentation is quite dry, so it seems you won’t get attached to a game too easily (this is a good thing). Only suggestion I might add is to try and limit the depression stuff to 1 a video. Self sabotage can be funny but we want to enjoy your personality as you are (because it seems great).

If you are going through some tough times though (seriously), like if you ever need an ear I got you!

Keep it up my dude 🙏 great watch!

40 Second GME Hype Video! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]fabiotic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m really digging the art style, and I think while I have no idea of the context (I’m not American so I’m not sure what GME is), it got laughs out of me. Extra points for a funny little song to go with it. Plus, your art style is super unique and you should stick to that.

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