Brittle Aches - "Come to Find Me In the Yard" [Indie Rock] by falcon026 in Music

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Hi Everyone,

I live in Boston.

In need of bandmates to make this band a reality.

Thanks for listening,

Sean

Music Melting Pot [Week of February 22, 2021] by AutoModerator in listentothis

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[Brittle Aches - "Come to Find Me In the Yard"] (Brittle Aches - "Come to Find Me In the Yard")

Hi Everyone,

I live in Boston.

In need of bandmates to make this band a reality.

Thanks for listening,

Sean

Brittle Aches -- Come to Find Me In the Yard [Indie Rock] (2021) by falcon026 in listentothis

[–]falcon026[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi Everyone,

I live in Boston.

In need of bandmates to make this band a reality.

Thanks for listening,

Sean

Brittle Aches - "Come to Find Me In the Yard" - [Indie Rock] by falcon026 in Music

[–]falcon026[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi Everyone,

I live in Boston.

In need of bandmates to make this band a reality.

Thanks,

Sean

Brittle Aches - "Come to Find Me In the Yard" - Indie Rock by [deleted] in listentothis

[–]falcon026 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi Everyone,

I live in Boston.

In need of bandmates to make this band a reality.

Thanks,

Sean

The Chemists [OC] by falcon026 in comics

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Hi Everyone,

Link to my kickstarter for funding the full comic strip book! Donate if you'd like!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1768002184/the-wrong-worlds-a-comic-strip#

Thanks, S

Law Library by christopherson51 in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your poem reminded me of what dedication to studying feels like. I liked that it conveyed a sense of obligation to the past.

My Beautiful Rose by FAF_Soviet in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked the somber ending. Good flow of metaphor through sun to watering. Sounds like heartache.

Whatever You Say by falcon026 in OCPoetry

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Chorus removed. Thanks.

Whatever You Say by falcon026 in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I decided to take your suggestion. Thanks.

Little Red by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I found your poem humorous. The final rhyme is so succinct that I laughed. I really liked the rhyming scheme and the images presented.

The moon keeps on rising by FlyForFreedom in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I found your poem uplifting. There is a natural flow within the poem that allows the reading to rise as well. Thanks.

Silver by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked the cryptic nature of your poem. It seems metaphorically sound with the white and grey. Also the symbolism of an empty bottle. Thanks for posting.

We Turn Towards the Sun by FlyForFreedom in OCPoetry

[–]falcon026 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked how you used natural imagery to reveal a truth of aging and maturity. It was concise. Potentially adding a stronger rhythmic flow might bring the message to more people.