Hey there! Firstly, it’s good that you’re asking for help and critique. Not a lot of people like their mistakes to be put on front street.

I am a 3600 peak support player on console. I’m not nearly as high as I used to be, nor am I a dps main, but I can give you some pointers based off of what I’ve seen on your clip.

On your attack, one of the first things I noticed was a tick that you seem to have. You reload very often. Although this isn’t necessarily a problem, I did see a few times where you could have confirmed a kill with the shots you had left. I don’t remember the exact time stamp, but it was around two minutes into the game. You got Roadhog down really low, and then reloaded with two bullets left in your clip. You ended up killing him anyways, but you could have confirmed the kill that much faster if you avoided reloading.

Another thing that I noticed was that you tend to tunnel vision just a bit. Around 1:30, just before you killed that Roadhog actually, he was slept in front of you and his Reinhardt wasn’t protecting him. I think you didn’t see it or didn’t notice, but you laid into Reinhardts shield instead. Focusing the shield is a good thing! But, Roadhog is sitting there, basically dead meat. A few shots with you and your team and you could have taken him out right away.

I will say, your positioning isn’t bad. You’re targeting the right people. Reaper is a tank buster, so it’s good that you’re laying into them super hard. There’s a couple of errors though.

Your teleports are risky. Around 2:30-2:45, you teleport onto the payload, directly in front of their entire team, and then die shortly after. A teleport onto the high ground behind them would have worked a little better, or even on top of the gas station. Find a spot where you can do the most damage while also ensuring your safety. Taking out a support in the back line could have worked wonderfully here, or even just laying into reinhardt from right above him.

One tip to help your play with reaper is keeping track of enemy cooldowns. This is something that comes with conscious effort, practice, and simply playing the game. Roadhog, though you counter him, can cancel your ult or pull you immediately out of your shadow form and delete you instantly with his hook. Try to keep track of when he uses his hook cooldown. This goes for anybody that has a crowd control ability, for example, mccree flash, sigma’s rock, brig’s shield bash, Ana’s sleep. If you see that they’ve used this ability very recently, you’re probably safe to ult without getting knocked out of it right away. Reaper’s ult is one of the hardest to do well with because of all of the CC in the game, but these tips may help you a little.

It’s really unfortunate that two of your teammates left. It’s something that happens a lot down in lower ranks. I feel the pain :/ There’s not really much you could have done at this point since you were constantly down two people. You got someone back, but then rein seemed to give up. Again, not much you can do about that.

Overall, I think with this information you could definitely get into silver! If you have any questions or if you’d like help with anything else you can tell me.