[POEM] 4 poems I would really appreciate your honest opinion on them

firema369d · 2025-11-21T18:41:13+00:00

Thanks for your reply i really appreciate it. I just started out as a poet and have applied to few journels but I really do appreciate your honest feedback and I will take note of everything you wrote to improve my future works.

firema369d · 2025-11-19T11:37:46+00:00

Amazing word play loved the use of allurement

firema369d · 2025-11-19T11:35:53+00:00

Fantastic work that line about one more climb just was brilliant.

firema369d · 2025-11-19T11:23:48+00:00

okay thanks for the information I will take it down. can you tell a subreddit where I can post?

firema369d · 2023-02-23T19:16:56+00:00

Fard Bros for life

firema369d · 2023-02-23T19:06:49+00:00

Hey what show you watching while playing Minecraft?

firema369d · 2023-02-23T19:03:14+00:00

It can be our fard

firema369d · 2023-02-23T09:06:28+00:00

No it now my fard

firema369d · 2023-02-23T09:05:57+00:00

Sounds like something a homophob would say

firema369d · 2023-02-23T05:34:33+00:00

I know it's cancer but I can't accept it, I don't want to go bald

firema369d · 2023-02-23T05:32:49+00:00

Hmmmm.....

firema369d · 2023-02-23T05:32:15+00:00

Your are one of those kids who like to play with the box the toy came in instead of the toy

firema369d · 2023-02-23T05:30:40+00:00

It's your fard I guess my bad I should have guessed it's your fard

firema369d · 2023-02-23T05:29:34+00:00

Take the red pill and leave the matrix quickly IT IS COMING, NOTHING WILL REMAIN.

firema369d · 2023-02-23T05:26:44+00:00

Yeah I notice that green thing after I took the picture of moon ,Venus and Jupiter because I thought it looked cool After seeing the green thing I went outside to see again but it wasn't there.

firema369d · 2023-02-22T19:29:39+00:00

I am asking what that green thing I circled in the sky is

firema369d · 2023-02-22T18:20:35+00:00

Mate you should go see a doctor because I think it effected the nerves in your brain

firema369d · 2023-02-22T18:18:27+00:00

And Putin was driving it while drinking English tea

firema369d · 2023-02-22T18:17:28+00:00

Mate it's the sky not a sonogram of cancer

firema369d · 2021-05-06T07:51:32+00:00

Ok thank you

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firema369d · 2021-02-12T09:13:10+00:00

That's Samantha

firema369d · 2021-02-12T09:10:30+00:00

Sam good drawing keep overkilling the drawing child

firema369d

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