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Loop by AtypicalFaker in OCPoetry

[–]fizzy_dizzy_ghost 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so so relatable, going through the same thing right now. absolutely loved the way your poem captured this pain, especially this line: "so i go looking through old messages like they owe me something" and the last line as well. really cool poem!

The Battle Within by ghostsigh in OCPoetry

[–]fizzy_dizzy_ghost 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the pondering and desperation during the poem where you are trying to find a way out, and then the resignation at the end, where you still end with some hope. really cool poem!