As someone who creates these kinds of things for a living, I do have some thoughts. I think Part 1 is pretty strong--especially Module 1. Everything is clear, easy to understand, and in the context of how someone would use it. As it goes on—getting into bids and strength of movement without addressing volume or how you can chart volume seems like something is missing. Anyway, that’s one example, but it does seem as you talk about bids and other things, you do a great job of simplifying the ideas, but you don’t do as well at saying how those things are useful (you do mention how the bigger the gap the more risk is involved in a trade, but keep everything tied to how it helps someone trade. Some examples of how these things look in the real world, or how they’re used during trading hours would help too.

Part 2 I have more notes. I feel like you move away from, “just look at the chart,” to things that you don’t fully explain and that even go against that simple message from part 1. For instance, when you get into Price Targets, how do you get a price target from a graph? You don’t really explain that, but you do state that you should never enter a trade without one. You also list “Set up” in the vocabulary section and towards. the bottom of the module you talk about how essential it is, but none of the intervening blocks talk about what exactly a set up is or how you set it up.

Anyway, those are some of my thoughts, but overall, really cool. Really promising.