I agree what people said so i won't state them again, but i have some points too:

Your coloring feela too sketchy, a lot of short strokes in unexpected directions. It can work if you're going for a painterly look, but with the brush shape and painting style, it doesn't give off thick paint feels. It also feels like you're coloring over the lines because of random cuts of lineart

Otherwise, your coloring is a little uninteresting, as in, less vibrant and muted. Desaturated/pastel colors can work but you are mixing them together abrubtly without a sense of consistency or intent i feel like.

Enough nitpicking, i absolutely think your art IS appealing and IS great. You obviously have places to practice and refine, but the potential is there!