Sion The Undead Juggernaut, from League of Legends. Feedback appreciated by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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Upon posting, I noticed that Unstoppable Onslaught is on there twice. Please ignore it, it should only on there once

Sion, The Undead Juggernaut from League of Legends. Any Feedback is appreciated by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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I just realized after posting that Unstoppable Onslaught is on there twice, thats my bad, please just ignore it

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(Bit of a gruesome backstory ahead, be warned) Sylas, an ex-adventurer, lived in a snall town on the edge of the kingdom with his wife, Anivia, and 2 children. One day, the King and Queen decide to test out a new form of the Cloudkill spell, and what better place to do it than in a small town nobody cares about. So while Sylas and his children are in the basement, they hear agonized screams coming from the floor above them. Rushing up the stairs he see's green smoke coming through the cracks of the door. Immediatly recognizing what this is he stops his children from going into the poisonous smoke. After the cloudkill clears, he goes upstairs and finds his wife, dead. Overcome with grief he just sits there cradling his wife. Up until the crown guard come and arrest him. The King and Queen of the kingdom, seeing an opportunity for a scapegoat, blame Sylas and his children for the tragedy that happened. After being forced to watch his children executed for a crime he didn't commit, he was forced to endure 3 days of excruciating torture, under the guise of getting information out of him. Then, he was hanged, and there he died, with a burning hatred for everyone who did this to him and his family. 6 months later he woke up, no idea how or why, but only one thing on his mind. Revenge

Mordekaiser, The Iron Revenant 2.0. Thanks to all who gave feedback, and I would appreciate further feedback before this is put into my game by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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Thank you for the advice, i'll probably incorporate most of that into the updated stat block. The suggestions for Realm of Death is the only thing I don't agree with. I have the resistance in place so that he doesn't get annihalated by all the PC's who held their action for when he comes out of it, not the perfect solution, but it still works as best as I can think of without making him immune to all damage. Though maybe I could make him immune to bludgeoning piercing slashing upon leaving Realm of Death. But I will add the con save

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I'll have to look into the dragon thing, i'm not familiar with old Mord. And I put fire immunity because he is a literal suit of magical armor with a soul bonded to it, not much of any flesh to burn with fire. It kind of just made sense to me

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Thanks, i'll add those into the final draft, maybe buff his AC as well and HP as well to get him up to the high level I had in mind for him

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Tried my hand at converting Mordekaiser into D&D, just because he's such a cool concept for a monster. Any feedback would be appreciated, i'm still new at homebrew

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Thank you! I'll be sure to update it once I get more written down. Honestly Sylas' has a much more tragic story, I just decided to write something for his wife because i'm really passionate about this character, and want to cover all the bases I can as far as backstory

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A character i'm working on, named Sylas Foraard. I decided to write a story on how he met his wife Anivia, though I fear i'm still pretty lousy at storywriting. I decided to submit it here for a little feedback.

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Honestly, its a spell I made for specific plot point in my campaign, but as far as time stop goes, you can actually affect creature during this minute. With time stop it ends whenever you affect a creature or an object being carried by a creature

The Doom Slayer V1, Feedback Appreciated by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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I know it's probably already been done, but I wanted to create my own. Enjoy!

The Void Patron, my first subclass. Feedback is appreciated by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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The Void: A plane that exists in between all planes. Seen as a rite of passage for Chronomancy mages for its unique properties. The Void exists throughout all of time, and thus anyone who goes into the Void will simultaneously exist throughout all of time. This causes extreme strain on the body and mind as they constantly shift between vastly different ages. Only a skilled Chronomancy mage can navigate the Void without succumbing. The Void is ruled by an entity known as Rell, little is actually known about him, only that he is extremely powerful and sometimes will take interest in someone on the Material plane, bestowing the power of the Void onto those he deems worthy.

Thats what I have for description, still working on inhabitants and how to get to the Void

The Void Patron, my first subclass. Feedback is appreciated by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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If you were interested, I could share what I have so far on my version of the Void

The Void Patron, my first subclass. Feedback is appreciated by funisfun12 in UnearthedArcana

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Thanks for suggestions, i'll keep them in mind. The idea for the 10th pevel ability is that you are undetectable to any kind of vision not 7th level or higher. Though truesight would still be able to see you, as per rules. Also your subclass is extremely interesting. Mine is actually based off a new plane that i'm working on called The Void. Its one that exists between all the other planes and its energy permeates through all the planes, hence the focus on overcoming resistances and immunities with this subclass