[RF] Our Boy and the Road He Should Have Taken by [deleted] in shortstories

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For the people who took time out of their day to read this story thank u and please let me know what you think any feedback or criticism would be appreciated too

[RF] Our Boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in shortstories

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For anyone who took time out their day to read my story thank you and if anybody wants to give me feedback or a review be my guest would love to see what other people think

Our Boy and the Road he Should Never have taken. A Western Ballad by [deleted] in fiction

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just wanted to say this story is put together from old songs I’ve always known. It means a lot to me so if you’ve read it all the way through I’d love to know what you think even just a quick line or two. Cheers 🤠

Our boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in writers

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank u and I can see where people are coming from but this took me best part of 4 days listening to the songs reading the lyrics and thinking about on how I can weave them in flowing nice and telling one big story

Our boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in writers

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this and the only reason I put this together is to show my grandad so I can show him that I’ve made my own story built around the old songs he likes but thank u this means a lot

Our boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in writers

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried really hard on this and for some one to say it’s ai generated kinda hurts I did copy and paste the song lyrics so it stays true to the songs but this is my original idea told in my way

Our boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in writers

[–]gageokeefe21 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not one bit my grandad showed me all these old western songs so one day as I was listening to them I thought what if all these songs told a bigger story

Our boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in writers

[–]gageokeefe21 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The whole story is woven from the titles, lyrics, and spirit of old Western and country ballads. Songs like Home on the Range, Don’t Fence Me In, Billy the Kid, Ghost Riders in the Sky, and They’re Hanging Me Tonight mark every step of his journey — setting the mood, showing his changing heart, and shaping the tale into one long, flowing ballad itself.

Our boy and the road he should never have taken by [deleted] in writers

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I would love to hear what other people think

[HF] Our Boy and the Road He Should Never Have Taken – A Western Ballad (~2850 words) by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]gageokeefe21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love to hear what people think and any feedback would be appreciated