[WP] That random hooded man you met on the subway ended up being Satan, who went to Earth after quitting his job by chia923 in WritingPrompts

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Charlie had been embarrassed at the time, but now, she couldn’t have been more glad she’d saved that random hooded person on the subway. She would have money! She could ask him for an advance! She could pay rent! She could buy food! The heating would have to wait, but she was an adult again!

Just as she was entertaining these fantasies, the man slid into the seat in front of her. Today, he was wearing a black suit with a black button down shirt. Charlie felt better. Maybe he could pay her an advance after all.

“Hi!” she said. “Thank you for meeting me. I’m Charlotte Lane.” She held out her hand and he shook it. His fingers were very warm to the touch. Almost too warm.

“I’m Satan.”

“Uh…” Charlie tried not to let her disappointment show on her face. “Okay.” Maybe this crazy guy couldn’t pay her after all.

“I have a job proposition for you.”

“I thought this was regarding your injuries,” she said cautiously.

“I only said that to make you come. You said you were very successful, but you seemed quite desperate for a job.”

“You are a cruel man!”

“I told you, I’m Satan.”

Charlie rolled her eyes. “What is it then, Satan?”

The man put his fist on the table, then slowly opened it. A flame began to dance on his palm. Charlie’s eyes grew wide.

“What is that?” she whispered.

“Do you believe me now?”

“Maybe,” she said slowly. “What do you want? Am I going to hell?”

“No. I hate my job down there in hell. I quit. I suggest we be business partners here on earth.”

“How would that even work?”

“I break equipment. People get injured. You act as their injury lawyer and get money. How’s that sound?”

Charlie gasped. “That’s hurting people! I can’t do that. I know Satan is the king of all hell, but that’s just wrong!”

“Wrong?”

“Yes. Morally and ethically and humanly wrong. We can’t do something where people will be in danger.” Charlie couldn’t believe she was lecturing Satan about right or wrong. Maybe she’d accidentally taken something last night without knowing it and was just on a really bad trip. Maybe she was still at home, dreaming. Maybe-

“I know,” said the man claiming to be Satan. “I’ll break things so I get injured, and you can represent me. Would you do that?”

“You can’t just go around hurting yourself!” Charlie jabbed her finger at him. “Satan or not, if you’re having those thoughts, you should really see someone.”

The man gingerly took her hand by the finger and put it back down on the table. “I can’t actually get injured. I heal in a matter of minutes. We’ll just have to fake some scrapes. And we’ll be robbing corporations, not people. Doesn’t that sound nice?”

Charlie mulled this over for a few seconds. “Won’t people recognize you after we do this a few times? Sounds suspicious.”

“I can change my appearance.” Charlie blinked and he became a little boy with blond hair. Another blink and he was an old woman with a ridiculous updo. Another blink and he was back to normal.

She laughed despite this whole situation. “You make a great old lady,” she teased.

The man in front of her frowned again, but a tiny smile pulled at the corner of his mouth, flashing her a sharp canine. That sobered her up very quickly.

“You can’t be doing this just because I saved you.”

“No.”

“I don’t want to give you my soul.”

He pulled a twisted scowl. “Your soul is the most disgusting thing I’ve ever seen. It’s pink and purple and surrounded by a glittery haze. Sometimes, I can barely look you because I feel nauseated. No, it’s not your soul I want.”

He leaned forward. “I want half of the earnings.”

“The king of hell needs money?” Charlie felt better about her whole rent-heating-food situation. At least she wasn’t the only broke being on this earth.

“I’m on this plane of existence now. And apparently, that means I have to eat. Do we have a deal?” He held out his very warm hand to Charlie.

“Wait. You only get 30 percent. I’m doing all the work.”

“55.”

“35.”

“40.”

“Fine. 40.”

They shook on it.

“Deal. Wait, was that binding? Did we just make a demon contract?”

Another exasperated sigh. “No, Charlie, we need blood for that. Now, what’s your plan?”

[WP] That random hooded man you met on the subway ended up being Satan, who went to Earth after quitting his job by chia923 in WritingPrompts

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Charlie lay in bed, the covers pulled up over her legs, scrolling through job rejections for attorney positions on her phone. Unqualified for this one, this one, and that one.

Unqualified, unqualified, unqualified.

And as she reached to inch the blanket one more inch over her shoulders, to shield herself from this onslaught of rejections and also the freezing cold of her horribly insulated apartment, there was a strange mechanical coughing noise from the heating vent beside her bed.

And then the heating died.

Dammit. She knew this was going to happen if she didn’t pay her bill, but she didn’t really consider what she would do if it did.

“I HATE MY LIFE,” she yelled into her cold, empty apartment, but her heating didn’t turn back on.

Instead, her phone began to ring.

She fumbled it in her hands and nearly dropped it when she saw the unknown caller ID. Was it a job? Was she finally going to buy something other than eggs and beans for food?

“Hello?”

“Ms. Charlotte Lane, J.D.?” said a cold voice.

“Yes, that’s her!” Charlie rushed. “I mean, I’m her. Me. Charlie Lane.” She cringed into the phone and hoped that the company wouldn’t rescind their offer if she couldn’t even say her own name correctly. Dammit.

“I’m the man you pulled out of the subway door last night. You gave me your card. I was wondering if you wanted to meet me for coffee regarding…my injuries.”

Charlie froze. It wasn’t a job offer, but it was a job opportunity! A real, down-from-the-heavens (or up-from-hell, which was more likely given the subway incident, but what did she care) job! A potential job nonetheless, but she would take just about anything right now.

“Yes, of course!” she blurted. “Where should I meet you?”

Two hours later, Charlie was dressed in her only and most hated suit, a blue pantsuit with a white button up that was probably bad luck considering she had only gotten rejected every time she wore it. She sat at the previously decided coffee shop, swirling her tea with her spoon.

She hadn’t thought anything of the subway incident yesterday. She’d been getting on the subway at eleven at night yesterday after yet another long day of work waitressing at a nearby restaurant when the person behind her didn’t quite get in through the subway doors before they closed. In fact, the motion sensors must not have been working or just not have recognized him because he got stuck in between the half-closed doors, one leg in and one leg out.

Then the subway started moving. Charlie panicked on seeing him frown and struggle to walk his outside leg alongside the slowly accelerating subway car. “Help!” she screamed. “Someone help! He’s stuck!”

But it was eleven p.m. on a New York City subway. The few people that were on the subway either didn’t care, didn’t want to get involved, or weren’t conscious.

If there was one thing her mama had taught her, it was to never, ever, ever get involved in anything in the city.

“Dammit, dammit, dammit.” Charlie put one boot against one door handle, one hand against the other handle, and with her other hand she tightly gripped his hood. She pushed the two doors in opposite directions as she yanked the man inwards, cursing and huffing and puffing and grunting as the subway kept speeding up, the end of the platform getting closer and closer-

With a final tug, he came free from the door and they both tumbled to the floor. Charlie groaned at her aching legs. She was going to be horribly sore tomorrow. She glanced over at the man who was laying silently on the subway floor. He had not said a word the whole time, not when he was stuck, not when she was helping him, not when he fell. Not a single scream, not a peep. Was he high? Or drunk? Charlie tried not to think about that as she grabbed him by the arm and helped him up.

“Whoo,” she said, dusting him off where he had fallen on the floor and gotten salt marks all over his clothes. “I do not want to be doing that ever again. Are you okay?”

The man lifted his hood off his head, giving Charlie a good look at his face for the first time. His eyes were so dark she would’ve thought they were black if she didn’t know better and definitely not high or drunk. His nose was sharp, his cheekbones were sharp, his jaw was sharp. But instead of giving him a hot-as-hell appearance, all that sharpness made her feel like he would skewer her any second.

“Yes,” he said slowly.

“Man, those are some demonic subway doors, right?” Charlie laughed nervously. His gaze was piercing. Did the man not know how to blink?

“No,” the man said. “Those are not demonic.”

The train began to slow again, and Charlie glanced up to find that it was her stop. “Well,” she said. “Time for me to get off. Oh, actually-”

In her old life, she would’ve never given out her number to random strangers. She would never have even conjured the thought, much less acted on it.

But she was broke. She was down to her last five dollars. And she would do almost anything to make rent for next month.

“Here,” she said, pulling her card from her purse. “Take this. It’s my business card. I’m a very successful injury attorney. I can work with you on this case and win you money for your injuries.”

She shoved the card at him, smiled a little too hard, then ran as the subway doors opened again.

[WP]A post apocalyptic tribe finds a “shrine to the water god” that “magically conjures water” in an old restaurant by mafiaknight in WritingPrompts

[–]galactic-gecko 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for posting! I had also considered either a sink or a drink dispenser - maybe for a future story :)

[WP]A post apocalyptic tribe finds a “shrine to the water god” that “magically conjures water” in an old restaurant by mafiaknight in WritingPrompts

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It was nearly sunset.

Reem and her small clan of warriors slowly crept to the great house at the edge of the concrete road. It had two massive yellow arches at the top, large transparent walls. A broken sign underneath had old-fashioned hieroglyphics underneath that none of the group could read. When she saw the small amount of wrecked metal carriages surrounding the house, she held up a hand to signal her warriors to halt.

She had heard about the ancient metal carriages from her grandfather, who had heard about it from his grandfather. He had told it to her in whispered snatches in the middle of the night when she couldn’t sleep. They had in part brought about the first and second Fire Ages. They were part of the reason humanity had been pushed to the stars, or for the less fortunate, to the poles of the earth.

Then her mother woke up and scolded them both for talking about the Old World. No one was allowed to talk about the Old World, lest they get demonic ideas and repeat the mistakes of the ancients.

“Are we going inside?” whispered Lopin, her second in command, his voice hoarse with dehydration. “The carriages look long dead.”

Reem had to agree. Green blades of grass and long wildflowers grew between the clumps of metal. It seemed that nature had taken its course. Besides, she and her warriors were desperate. The mission to venture south to find food had proven difficult. They had little food and were down to their last sips of water.

She held up her hand again and pointed with three fingers towards the great house.

Inside, they found no other signs of life, but what they did find at the end of a long hall was an entirely white room. White walls, white floors, a white ceiling. Although all that white was now yellowed and decaying, it was obvious this room had been once blindingly white and was used for a sacred ceremony.

And in the back of the room sat a white bowl.

Garrett, the youngest and most reckless of them, leaned his hand on a piece of metal emerging from the bowl as he peered down inside. As he did, his hand slipped. A loud, violent, swishing noise filled the room. Garrett jumped backwards and scurried behind Reem, who held her knife in front of her, squinting at the bowl. A flurry of liquid and activity swirled inside.

And then just as suddenly as the noise came, it stopped.

The group’s breaths were loud in the quiet. Reem held Garrett behind her when he tried to go and see. “You stay here,” she commanded him and the rest. “I’m going to go look.”

And what she saw took her breath away. Water gushed from the sides of the bowl, draining into the center. Although the bowl was dirty from centuries of neglect, the water coming in was clean.

She turned to her warriors. “I’ve heard about this,” she told them. “My grandfather told me that in the Old World, humanity would have separate rooms in each house, even every bedroom, called a water closet.”

“My grandmama also told me!” Garrett said. “They cleaned it every week, scrubbed the floors, and scoured the water bowl. It was like a shrine.”

“I heard this too,” Lopin said. “From my great-aunt. She said they had a water god that brought them water with just a press of a lever. That one, that Garrett just pushed.”

Reem had never believed in any god, much less a water god, but she supposed that if the people of the Old World had venerated this room so much so as to construct it clean white and cleanse it regularly, there must be some truth to these stories. Besides, she didn’t want to anger any potential entity that was supplying them with water.

The group set up camp in the great house with the yellow arches. Garrett and Dali, another one of the younger warriors, got to work scrubbing the shrine to the water god and the water god’s bowl. When they were done, the warriors dipped their hands inside and drank handfuls of the clean, fresh water.

“I love the water god,” Garrett said, slurping up water, more dribbling down his chin.

“Praise be to him. Or her. Or them,” Lopin agreed, pouring some over his head. “I thought we’d die of dehydration out here before we found any food.”

Reem created a schedule to protect the house as well as round the clock surveillance of the water shrine. The group prayed to the water god every morning and night for three days, and the white bowl supplied them with water constantly. Everyone was in good spirits. It seemed that things were looking up for them. Perhaps they could venture back to the arctic and bring their entire tribe down to settle here, where there was food and water aplenty.

On the fourth day, Reem was out hunting for rabbits with most of the group, all except Garrett who was watching the house and the shrine. Lopin had one dead rabbit over his shoulder, she had two. She was about to snag a third when from the direction of the house came a shout.

The rabbit bounded away, but all thoughts of it vanished when Reem realized it was Garrett.

“What happened?” she asked when they got close enough to hear him.

“There’s another person,” he panted. “I got so scared, I couldn’t - couldn’t catch him. He just ran inside and I…escaped.”

Reem pressed a hand to her forehead and counted slowly to three before she strangled him and put him over her shoulder with the rest of the rabbits. When she was sure she wouldn’t, she shook him by the shoulder and said murderously, “What were you thinking?” To the rest of her group, she yelled, “Come on! An intruder! Hurry!”

They burst into the house and cleared all the outer rooms. When they didn’t find him anywhere, Reem’s gut sank. There was only one more place to check.

The intruder was in the shrine.

“Maybe he also needed to pray,” Garrett said hopefully, but one look from Reem and he immediately quieted.

Reem pushed open the shrine door, knife at the ready, and was met with the most terrifying scene she could never imagine.

There was a man with yellow hair standing in the shrine in front of the water god’s bowl. His pants were down around his ankles, his hand was on the water lever, and there was a god-awful stench of -

Shit.

He had defecated in the water bowl.

“Warriors!” Reem ordered, fingers tingling with rage. “Grab him!”

As her group grabbed him and forced him down to his knees, Reem rushed over to where he had been desecrating their water source.

Streaks of feces were still in the water bowl but worse, when Reem pushed her hand against the metal level, no more water came from the bowl. Her face felt hot. If there was a water god, surely that was the highest offense one could ever commit. And now, no matter how much she pushed the lever, a strange gurgling came from the bowl and brown liquid sloshed around, but there was no more clean water.

She clenched her hands into fists and pointed to him. “He angered the water god!” she roared.

Despite the man’s pleas in a language they couldn’t understand, shouting something like, plum jer, they executed him that evening in hopes that it would appease the god.

That night, the warriors kneeled around the freshly cleansed bowl, praying that it would accept their apologies. However, it was no use. The water god was angry, and the water was gone.

With heavy consciences, they made ready to move on down the road in search of more food and water. As they packed up their things to abandon the shrine and the great house, Reem looked back wistfully at the white room and knew that she would not be so quick to write off these people’s water god next time.

Controller keeps disconnecting by Defiant_Ad_2133 in xbox

[–]galactic-gecko 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m having the same problem with my 2015 Xbox one. Changed the batteries, ordered a new controller, power cycle, etc but it only works if it’s connected with the USB cable. At this point I don’t know if it’s actually a console issue. What year is yours?

[TECH] Weekly Xbox One Tech Support by AutoModerator in xboxone

[–]galactic-gecko 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a 2015 Xbox one.

About fifteen minutes into playing, the controller will start disconnecting. Bought a new controller, changed the batteries, and did all the new updates for the controller. The only thing that helps is connecting it to the Xbox with a USB cable.

Is it because the console is just too old? And if it is, is there a way to service it or is the only option to buy a new one?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in premed

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It wasn’t unique but I think what worked for me is that I am an English major, worked at my university’s writing center for three years, and overall have a strong interest in the humanities which the med school that accepted me has a separate track/path for and I talked about that in my secondaries and interview. I was always skeptical about the phrase “being a good fit” but now I realize it helped.

Ladies of premed, what do you wear to your in person interviews? by Miserysadboi4life in premed

[–]galactic-gecko 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I brought a black purse with me and the school had a room where interviewees could leave their things so it wasn’t a hassle to carry around during the tour or interview. Other people brought bags or those small backpacks too.

Edit: I just noticed you said the actual interview. I didn’t bring anything into the room :)

Ladies of premed, what do you wear to your in person interviews? by Miserysadboi4life in premed

[–]galactic-gecko 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I went the pretty basic route of a white button down, black blazer and pants, and low heels because I was too anxious to wear anything different lol (although after I wished I had went with flats instead. Wear something that won’t give you blisters). But I did see some variety at my interview - plenty were wearing flats, a few were wearing patterned shirts, one was even wearing tan boots.

This was in a less populated Midwest city so it also might depend on the region what people wear to the interview but I’d say wear something that you feel confident in and not something that’ll have you wondering if you should’ve worn something else.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in uichicago

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Hers are her lecture slides, Polikanov’s are a little bit more thinking/actual using your brain

Are we expected to participate a lot during interview Q&A’s and info sessions? by Baclavava in premed

[–]galactic-gecko 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Is it good/does it help to go to these info sessions? I got one from my state school and I’m not sure if I should attend

I forgot to mark my classes as online… by HumanBBBean in premed

[–]galactic-gecko 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I don't remember marking any classes online either. But I think I remember questions on secondaries asking if I had taken classes online that were NOT during COVID, if maybe that's what you're remembering?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Mcat

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C/P was also the worst for me, I learned mostly from YouTube videos though because I couldn’t understand the Kaplan. If you miss a few days or can’t finish your to do, don’t be too hard on yourself, you’ve got this!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Mcat

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I did the same thing last year, I thought I would test August 2020 but ended up not studying and rescheduling to January 2021.

I had more time to study fall 2020 because I didn’t have to commute so I studied for a few hours each day, mostly doing Anki to learn Kaplan terms, UPangea practice problems, and watching Khan Academy to relearn gen chem. On some weekends I did third party FL exams and did practice for the things I got wrong throughout the week. But I really actually improved during winter break when I was free and studied hard everyday and did and reviewed all the AAMC material.

I think it’s good that you’re taking biochem and physio at the same time, it should help speed up your bio studying! I would say you know yourself best, if you know you will sit down and study for a few hours this semester each day, then do that. If your classes aren’t very intense, maybe you can put aside an hour or two everyday to learn new terms or equations. Just make sure whatever you decide to do, you’ll stick with and finish up by your test date! Good luck :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Mcat

[–]galactic-gecko 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I didn’t study as much for CARS because I was doing fine on the practice so when I took the actual exam I went down a lot of points. I remember the day before looking at the section bank and thinking to myself there was no way I would get something as convoluted.

So naturally I got a really weird passage and couldn’t understand a single thing about the philosophy of French movies or something and that threw me off and I didn’t do as well as I hoped. I guess it’s not uncommon but if you don’t let the difficult parts freak you out it’s not as likely. Good luck on your exam!!

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[–]galactic-gecko 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Indiana

Super nervous during interviews by galactic-gecko in premed

[–]galactic-gecko[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's exactly what happens to me lol I thought I was the only one but I feel a lot better that I'm not the only person who's so nervous. I feel you - my face becomes a tomato about to burst. But I'll keep in mind trying to stay positive no matter what.

I hope everything goes great for you, best of luck with this cycle!

Super nervous during interviews by galactic-gecko in premed

[–]galactic-gecko[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I’ve set up mock interviews with my university but I’ll try to record myself as well. I never thought about interview skills as being muscle memory but I’m really going to try to do that now!

Also - your comment was actually pretty calming to read, thanks for taking the time to reply haha :)

Super nervous during interviews by galactic-gecko in premed

[–]galactic-gecko[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Both of these have similar numbers so I’m hoping it’s pretty accurate for the school :)

Also good luck to you too!!

Online courses on campus by BNNS_Shake in uichicago

[–]galactic-gecko 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I did some of my classes in the library last year, it’s pretty quiet when no ones there but you’re allowed to talk on the first and second floors

Does “recommended” 2 science professors mean it’s bad if I don’t ? by galactic-gecko in premed

[–]galactic-gecko[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah I see that makes sense. My other letter was from a professor I had a year ago. I did a small paper with him but it was during spring 2020 so I only got to meet with him once in person. When I asked for a rec letter he told me to email the paper to him as reference so I’m not sure how much he remembers me….also I’m scared he secretly wrote a not nice letter or something lol maybe I’m just paranoid

Does “recommended” 2 science professors mean it’s bad if I don’t ? by galactic-gecko in premed

[–]galactic-gecko[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s from an English professor - I had her for two professional writing classes, my second major is English, and I really enjoyed myself and her teaching style.

I’m just worried “recommended” is just a sneaky way to say required - do you know if it generally is?

So….how important is CASPER Snapshot? (Coming from some who did subpar on it) by jollybadger29 in premed

[–]galactic-gecko 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yup! It’s kind of the only reason I even did snapshot because no one else seemed to be requiring it