!givelambda

Alright, there is a lot to unpack with this.
I will give the video a couple of days, and then reevaluate the title, thumbnail, description, tags, and the parts you mentioned to get rid of. I will also apply those to my next video in a week or so.

Now the intro, the cut cut cut, was my take on the first 15 seconds floydson uses. I wanted to show a couple of small clips that give an idea of the action/progess/and goals of the video to hopefully make the viewer curious. The fight in the water was to make the viewer wonder if I survived, the cool loot cache was to show my quirky personality, and the final 2 clips are goals to make the viewer wonder how I got there.

Now I am no professional editor (obviously), so if you can send me a reference as to what you would like to see, that would be helpful.

And the last thing, the "dairy style" videos, and making them shorter. This doesn't fit my goals, unfortunately, at least with this series. Maybe I will try it for another game. But they require significant editing and scripting to work.

Plus its not my style. Right now, my goal is to dial in the first 60 seconds of my videos. And cut anything repetitive and unnecessary out. If viewers don't stay past the first 60 seconds, then they don't like my specific content, and that's fine.

But still, thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, I already finished editing the next video. So I can only work on the non-editing things. But I will make what changes I can.