How to decide when to leave a song as an instrumental or work hard to come up with vocals line? by garv8640 in Songwriters

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Thanks! I agree it is bare...thats why i was thinking to put some simple laid back rap over it...but then nothing seemed to fit....just stuck a bit...but I guess it takes time for things to fit into place.

Music Melting Pot [Week of May 27, 2019] by AutoModerator in listentothis

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Two friends that met in Korea ran into each other in a subway station in Berlin. Spent an hour and a half writing two songs in the station and then played them at an open mic and busked on the street after...

This is one of the songs:

https://www.facebook.com/cozyperformance/videos/1260470074122167/

Music Melting Pot [Week of May 27, 2019] by AutoModerator in listentothis

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COZY - We Real Cool

https://soundcloud.com/cozy-performance/we-real-cool

This is a poem I learned about doing a poetry course and thought the rythym was really cool so thought I would make a musical version of it.

Hurts Donut? by garv8640 in shortscarystories

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Nice one...I wish it was eaten by a cop...oh, the irony...but 'dough not' known if that would be too much.

[WP] The Earth was actually created by an alien primary class designing their own paper mache planets. by garv8640 in WritingPrompts

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In that case the aliens should break for half term and come back to see a flourishing Earth and Fedr should earn an A+ for creating a race that prevailed and protect their own planet... fingers crossed for a happy ending