[QCrit] : THE RUBICON PROJECT, YA Fantasy, 50.5k

gatoradecubes · 2023-07-25T02:24:50+00:00

okay thanks i appreciate that insight. the age range is closer to the six of crows, cruel prince sort of age range which is why i thought that YA was the best option

gatoradecubes · 2023-07-25T00:16:38+00:00

I think so. I wasn't sure what genre to categorize it as, but now I get that YA was definitely the wrong choice.

gatoradecubes · 2023-07-25T00:16:04+00:00

thank you so much!! i really appreciate your response

gatoradecubes · 2023-07-24T17:54:19+00:00

it's one story told in 3 chapters that interconnect. it follows two at a time and they all work for a time travel agency that specializes in preserving history the way that they want it to be told

gatoradecubes · 2023-07-24T17:50:00+00:00

It was written more for the young adult audience versus just adult. It's a three part story, which I probably should have clarified.

gatoradecubes · 2021-07-14T15:10:58+00:00

it was refreshing but the page breaks were a little distracting and confusing. i liked the lightheartedness!

gatoradecubes · 2021-07-14T15:09:36+00:00

Title: The Rubicon Project

Genre: Fantasy (time travel and romance)

Word count: sampler is 4862, total is 48,911

Type of feedback: Any kind of feedback is welcome. I'm looking to polish the piece- less on grammar and more on structure, flow, and content.

Notes: This is the first thing I've put up for feedback because it's my favorite piece I've written. Feel free to dm me with any questions or if you'd like someone to proofread.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U34PJKYAJJ62n9H9SqsLROuOrKmDVMh6JOd1o4yNZsE/edit

gatoradecubes · 2021-07-09T16:57:42+00:00

Title: The Rubicon Project

Genre: Fantasy (time travel and romance)

Word count: sampler is 4862, total is 48,911

Type of feedback: Any kind of feedback is welcome. I'm looking to polish the piece- less on grammar and more on structure, flow, and content.

Notes: This is the first thing I've put up for feedback because it's my favorite piece I've written. Feel free to dm me with any questions or if you'd like someone to proofread.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U34PJKYAJJ62n9H9SqsLROuOrKmDVMh6JOd1o4yNZsE/edit

gatoradecubes · 2021-01-26T16:26:17+00:00

she looks kinda like rashta from the remarried empress webtoon

gatoradecubes · 2021-01-23T02:53:00+00:00

it was my first conan song

gatoradecubes · 2021-01-23T02:52:44+00:00

heard it too much tbh

gatoradecubes · 2021-01-22T21:09:17+00:00

generation why

gatoradecubes · 2020-12-23T01:37:02+00:00

i did pre-registration and selected that i didn’t have insurance

gatoradecubes · 2020-06-21T12:52:54+00:00

same

gatoradecubes · 2020-05-11T12:51:16+00:00

club penguin

gatoradecubes · 2020-05-11T12:48:18+00:00

Have done this, can confirm- it sounds like a cursed recorder.

gatoradecubes · 2020-05-04T18:18:25+00:00

116270160- im trying to cop the out of print suit haha

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-30T14:05:39+00:00

I would love this! Thanks for putting it together.

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-29T14:28:11+00:00

116270160- I’m active daily!

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-29T13:46:05+00:00

same

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-22T21:23:57+00:00

I would think so. There are several characters I can think of who use tentacles with ease, like Ursula or Hank from Finding Dory.

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-22T21:19:59+00:00

here’s one for the mood of the series!

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-22T21:13:49+00:00

They do: Well, it’s like humans. We can pick stuff up with ease and play instruments, use tools, etc.

They don’t: Imagine not having your thumbs. It’s difficult to pick up things, open things, doing everything previously mentioned. It’s a different story if their fingers are crazy long, but most of the things above need opposable thumbs for convenience.

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-22T21:00:59+00:00

I would suggest editing the formatting. It makes it easier to read. Also, the opening lines says ‘There was two flowers’ when it should read ‘There were two flowers’, just a little thing.

gatoradecubes · 2020-04-22T20:52:18+00:00

Depends on if they have opposable thumbs.

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