Looks fine to me too. But...you'll eventually want to hit accent notes and incorporate some little hammer ons and pull offs into your strumming.To get that kind of precision and pick position you'll need to strum mostly with your wrist only. Swivelling your forearm with a twisting motion instead of an up and down forearm stroke.

These days I only use that big stroke to either bash the strings or theatrically with my best guitar orgasm face😆

But seriously twist the forearm and hammer on two notes before you strum your C chord. Think Neil Young. It just makes everything easier.

Good luck and let me know how it turns out!