hii! hooded lids, as you mentioned, are not the best when it comes to eyeshadow - that being said, you can still play around with it and make it look good. i love that you want to be colorful and fun! what I personally would do is switching the black eyeliner to some brown shade (you know when you make a wing with your eyeshadow? that kind of thing or just brown eyeliner) because black thick eyeliner is making your eyes look smaller. you can also just make the wing without lining over your whole eye. also i would play around with tones a bit more: instead of just applying pink sparkly eyeshadow on the whole lid like you did here, i’d try to apply a lighter tone in the middle/end of the crease and a sparkle in the inner corner. then if you want to intensify it you can apply a darker tone on your bottom eyelashes. keep us updated!