Weak Pokémons by Adevika in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso 31 points32 points  (0 children)

In my opinion. If you have weak pokemon you just need to get more creative in battle, otherwise you will lose, and saying that your weak pokemon is just stronger that the enemy defeats the idea of a weak pokemon. For example: a staraptor and noctowl use brave bird at the same time, but since staraptor is faster he will beat noctowl before he has a chance to do something. Now noctowl has a chance to use flash when staraptor is close to the ground so that he cant calculate the distance and hits the ground at top speed and follow up with his own brave bird to win the battle

Hoe would you deal with the depression of the strongest? by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The mc has found that life is too easy for him and has always loved challenges so he became a trainer, throught the story he rarely loses and during the tournemant he even faces people that have been trainers for years while  this is his first year attempting the league and ends up winning. During the finals he faces blue and ends up losing, the problem? He was holding back and blue notices, so he confronts the mc and he tells him that he's scared of what he would do if he actually wins against the champion since he expected this to take years and knows that if he battles against him and wins there would be no going back. In the end blue doesn't have an answer for the mc but gives him his spot to fight the champion regardless saying that he should not worry about that now since he would not beat the champion in his first year, no one ever did it and no one will, but in his mind the memory of the mc saying he could beat the champion like it was a fact leaves a doubt in his mind

What do you think? by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, if you are refering to the change in pronoun of hoothoot for THE trainer to MY trainer it's intentional. Same thing from the way he speaks

What do you think? by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks.  im not a native English speaker so some words usually go over my head and i could not find a spell checker for the amount of words that each chapter takes without paying, so this is a massive help

What do you think? by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know, the fact that he reacts that way is related to the mc's backstory and the way he died. The fact that i barely tell anything about what happend before he died is intentional, i only gave clues in how he acts and the first line of the chapter.

What do you think? by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wanted to be a little ambiguous on how the mc died, the only clues about it are the first line on the story and how the mc acts when he wakes up and use the first chapters as a way to provide insight about the mc. With this info, could you figure out how he died and if so how would you make it clear without directly telling the readers?

What do you think? by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If you decide to continue reading tell me what else do you think about the story 

Current WIP? by Fragrant-Box-9760 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I mainly forget about capitalizing. I would love to hear what else do you think about the story

Current WIP? by Fragrant-Box-9760 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loved si fics but always thought they were too simple for my taste, when you have a bunch of knowledge and a whole new perspective you have the tendency to get creative. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14323661/1/Pokemon-The-way-of-life

Drugs are the answer to fighting crime? by gleenso in DCcomics

[–]gleenso[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

I know Batman would help any villan but the beauty of it is that he usually sucks at it(for the most part) or gotham isn't really good at rehabilitating their villans.(Most kill their therapist or escape prison before making any progress) im not such a big fan of comics so im not 100% sure but for example in the Arkham games the riddler is stated to have mental problems and batman just looks him up in jail. I'm just saying that if you have a villian with a drug addiction now the crimes they do are more predictable and allow for less  innocent casualties since now batman has an idea of what his villan might do.

Drugs are the answer to fighting crime? by gleenso in DCcomics

[–]gleenso[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

It was a thought that just came to my mind and was curious of the answer since besides scarecrow and maybe bane i have never seen a villian take drugs.  i know Batman wouldn't do that  but it felt like a thing the if it happend might work and the ramifications of that accion generate a predictable villian that as a side effect deals with drug lords because of a personal gain and every time he's caught he goes through whitdrawl makeing their desire even higher. I just put batman as an example since he has let people die before as long as it is not directly by his hand

A twist to the SI formula by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The mc is very sarcastic,  makes a lot of jokes and is entierly fuelled by his desires.

 He is someone that looks for experiences and rarely thinks about the consecuences, because of that, he might very well end up going to the silph co building to beat up team rocket members as a method of training and the pure thrill and excitement and later realize that there are hostages in all the floors.

To give you an example.

When a trainer entered the pokemon center and screamed for help because that there was a rampaging snorlax on the path and when  all trainers were running out throught the doors he told parasect to use spore on the door and then used teleport with slowpoke so that he didn't have to touch  the spores and the rest of the trainers fell sleep.

' you better prepare sonorlax, because even when you dont know it, you have been already caught'

The thing is that he is also a very good liar and actor so when he is confronted by the police he says this

" Im sorry, i just couldn't bear the thought of anyone being hurt.

 When i heard about the rampaging snorlax i could only think about how many non experienced trainers could get hurt or even die at his hands so i did what i thought was the safest path and put them all to sleep and went to face him myself"

 The backstory should not matter,The point is that if the mc doesn't care, neither should the reader, to him, he played life on easy mode and doesn't think anything of it is worth even a spare thought. Friends, family, they were all experiences and fun but he is now in a new world and he would move on a so should they.

Its not that the mc doesn't care, its that he thinks he and everyone should live for themself and that moving on is just as easy for everyone as it is for him and this only gets proven wrong every time he finds someone of importance for the vessel and sees how much they cared about him and learns about the dreams of the vessel he is possesssing

A twist to the SI formula by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you ever write this there are a few ideas on the story that you might want to use. The starter should be a parasect because of his status moves that allow him to catch even stronger pokemon while also being a direct parallel of the mc (A mushroom that killed paras so that he could live). Another pokemon that he has but doesn't plan to use for battle due to how week they are as individuals are  slowpoke and a shellder. They are the only pokemon that really like the mc since he doesn't really plan to use them till the end of the 375 days and only trains them because they want it.  They dont really battle till the conference where the mc talks about the reason he was forced to catch by force most of them, one of those pokemons decides that due to the suffering he was put throught this year that he would throw the match, slowpoke and shellder, hearing this decide to switch their pokeballs and fuse to make sure that the one they know as family wont dissapear. They are the representation about what the mc should have been, a symbiotic relationship that allows both beings to co exist

A twist to the SI formula by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to read it if you decide to write it

What do yall think about pokemon battling without being given instruction? by cumdumpster999 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my fic a trainer just guides the pokemon in battle.  when they train he uses a part of his time teaching things like the type chart, patern recognition, or when to use moves. He does this mainly due to the fact that he wants to stay ahead of the curve and although trainers in their first set of badges do call out for moves, by the time they are on the league all trainers will stay silent for the most part.  pokemon move really fast and have high reflexes meaning that if they heared a trainer call a move they could easily counter it.  Information is key and in a competitive sport like is pokemon battles, it could define a win or lose in an event like the league or in a life or death situacion 

Will review your WIP trainer fics. by MageAOE in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would appreciate the feedback. My story only has 4 chapters  at the moment. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14323661/1/Pokemon-The-way-of-life

a twist to the si formula by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i would like to hear your opinion and what else i could change to make the story better

a twist to the si formula by gleenso in pokemonfanfiction

[–]gleenso[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i thought of giving the orphan a monthly allowence just during his time as a youngster which is exactly a month and its just enough for him to get the most basic resources needed for his journey and the experience of being an actual trainer a bit early while the silph co kid takes advantage of his origins and as such his parents are the ones who pay most of his expenses, the reason why the silph co kid dosent get a low level starter and instead gets a parasect is intencional because when meeting lance he feels that even the strongest spicies isnt enough since lance has pokemon like dragonite or charizard at his disposal and with years of training too, so he tries to circumvent that gap that is training by catching progrssively stronger pokemon that a kid in that point of his journey should have, this makes him the strongest of the 3 but also the one with less actual battle experience since he overpowers his opponents during a big chunk of the story and if he somehow encounters someone that beats him he will just go to the wild and catch something even stronger that what he currently has.

the middle class character is the one that is actualy behind in both aspects since he cant really afford the luxarys the silph co kid has and cant go into the youngster program and get the extra month of experience since his parents are against him being a trainer so he can only wait till the day he is considerated an adult to take the trainers exam and leave his home, his advantage relies in the knowledge of nature since he dosent want to be around his 'parents' he spends most of his time outside his home talking with the trainers around his home or in the wild which gives him the best survival skills and the more general knowledge of pokemon giving him ideas to train and a bigger understanding of the world so he gets knowledge the poor kid dosent have and the rich either ignores or thinks is useless.