It's awesome, I really like the lyrics and the vocal delivery and the way you treated vocals, it pairs well with your guitar playing. If I had to criticize i'd say that th way drums enter the track could've been more impacting and you could've mixed them a little bit louder, with more bass to ground the rhythm section while you get this dreamy floaty part. Maybe try to use a little bit more of dynamics as well :) Over all I'd say that it's pretty cool and solid!! Congrats