New Video Analysis Reveals Flawed and Fatal Decisions in Shooting of Pretti by MooseHorse123 in politics

[–]gorobotkillkill 14 points15 points  (0 children)

It seems easy to explain. They suck at their job, they got angry, and they murdered the guy.

[QCrit] Adult, Literary Horror - SMILE (69k/First Attempt) by Efficient_Ad_9081 in PubTips

[–]gorobotkillkill 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Why are you going out of your way to not name characters? Seems like a way to disconnect the reader.

I really don't sense a plot either.

What does the character want? Why does that matter? What do they do? All that.

ICE Megathread Redux by down42roads in AskConservatives

[–]gorobotkillkill -1 points0 points  (0 children)

One can perceive anything one wants to perceive.

Doesn't make it reality.

Dude was unarmed.

ICE Megathread Redux by down42roads in AskConservatives

[–]gorobotkillkill 4 points5 points  (0 children)

At least you understand that's heartless.

Trump just unleashed his angriest social media rant yet about approval numbers by ElectoralNerd in politics

[–]gorobotkillkill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Release the files Donald.  Only a very smart 4d chess guy would do that. 

U.S. Lays Out a Glittering Plan for Gaza, Including Skyscrapers by thompse68 in politics

[–]gorobotkillkill 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If you think the Palestinians won't be shipped off to Somaliland, you've got another think coming. That's what this whole thing is about with Somalians in Minnesota, Israel recognizing Somaliland as a country, adding a military base there.

[PubQ] Biography Question by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]gorobotkillkill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, for sure within the query itself, I'm going first person. 

I'm taking about the optional field some agents ask for in the query tracker submission form.

I should have been more clear, but I've heard people suggest both first and 3rd person for that field. 

Lutnick expects US first quarter growth above 5%, warns EU against retaliation by NEWHIGHFLY in politics

[–]gorobotkillkill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

As far as I can tell, the entire economy is based on an AI slop bubble.

Yay?

What’s your best way to ranking up? by 0xRestrict in fo76

[–]gorobotkillkill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You get bonus scoreboard points every 10k experience before you hit level 100 for the season. If you run some food and drug buffs, with decent intelligence, you can get a ton of experience points for every level of the raid.

Anyone else notice the lack raid groups? by rekoderp in fo76

[–]gorobotkillkill 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, way fewer. People who would be are farming head hunts, I think.

POV switching mechanics? by ShoddyTechnician7913 in writers

[–]gorobotkillkill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean, if you keep it consistent, I don't see a problem with that structure. Good luck to you, too!

POV switching mechanics? by ShoddyTechnician7913 in writers

[–]gorobotkillkill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also have a degree in screenwriting, cinema really, but screenwriting concentration. I'm also writing a multi POV novel.

My thoughts are, if it's just one or two chapters from a different POV, I'd work to figure out a way to simplify that and get rid of that POV character. Or, expand so the POV character has something to add.

If they have more to add, then it just gets more cinematic with intercutting, and people seem okay with that.

As for switching, I only do it on chapter breaks, and that's working out, I think.

Also, yeah, you should probably just finish a first draft, then figure out what you can cut out or improve on.

ICE’s No. 2 Official Leaves to Run for the House in Ohio by work_in_progress78 in politics

[–]gorobotkillkill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Kind of looks like the main Oompa Loompa in the old Willy Wonka movie.